I am enjoying this story, so far Sarah seems pretty realistic. Looking forward to an update so be sure to keep posting them. If I could make one suggestion, change you summary. This story is a lot better than that description makes it sound, hope that made some sense.

this was good.update soon!

It's an okay story,
it's very well-written,
and it's not thatt marysueish.

Update Soon!

I love your story!
Up date please !