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| paperflower3 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThank you. I love your way of thinking for couples. Mostly I get really annoyed at people to dry to do really stupid couples. The fic was really cute, and well writen. I like the story line. I liked how open and how it puts a picture in the readers mine. Like with the cage being to dark to see what's in it. Great! I look forward to your new fics. and I will read, and comment, on your already done ones. It would be awesome if you would be able to finish unfinished fics. Keep up the great work. -paperflower3 |
| dragongoddess13 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abusehallelujeh! fuck flamers anyway i loved your story it was great perfect for a neji ten ten fic! =) |
| Molly 2008-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseawsome story :) |
| Sabuku Hana 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseIt actually seems like it shouldn't be a oneshot. And particularly i like InoxSai and ShikamaruxTemari |
| TenTen Hyuga 2008-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseCudos to you.Yours is probably going to better than mine is going to do.I have it wrote down and now I have to type it out on here.My account is Dreamer94678 on here.I haven't started typing it out,but I should start on it soon,ok?Check out please?Once again,your's rocks man!Keep up the good work.By the way,if you have an IMVU mine is TenTenHyuga1014,SasuSaku1014,NaruHina1014,and NejiTenTen1014 so add me if you do,if you don't,you need to get one,it is awsome |
| Hinata's sperit 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusei love it |
| RejectFalseIcons 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseBest NejixTenten pairing ive read! keep up the good work!! XD |
| Lonely Words 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuse'If I ate this would it make me a cannibal..?' LOL! You're story is good.. Description, dialogue.. However, the characters are a little OOC.. Nonetheless, very well done! |
| catinthehat007 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abusei thought what you said at the end about flamers was funny and i think ure right in that insultiong for the sake of insulting helps no one. anyway you have to worry about that from me b/c i didnt think the oneshot was that bad at all:) |
| Lala.o.o 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseHey. That was pretty good! ^^ Though I have got to say, you need to work on some things like grammatical and spelling errors. Accept is not the same thing as except. You said ride instead of rid. Just things like that. Just minor things like that, but when you have everything correct in your story, it makes the over-all quality better. And vice-versa. When you have all the errors in the world, it makes a story not so good. I've read stories where the story itself was good, but it had so many errors that I gave up on it. Sad, really. Anyways, it was really good and I enjoyed it. Write more! Love, Lala |
| an addicted fan of nejiten 2007-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuse...um...pervert?...idiot!...make something for temari and shikamaru...LOL |
| Olena 2007-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseDon't listen to those biches!That was one of the greatest stories yet! It totally got me and some of my friends blushing! |
| Matimac 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseOkay, the first review for you stories. Really nice oneshot for TenNeji! Well, I think Naruto was a bit too smart but thats okay. This might sound really stupid and idiotic, but the lemon was kinda confusing, bit still good. So, off to the next story... Greetz, Matimac |
| -butIdoLOVEyoU- 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Really good story you have! I really love how you kept Neji in character here. Especially, with that scene where Tenten confessed to him. THAT would be something Neji would say. Not only that, but this whole thing of Neji clashing with himself over his feelings IS him. You've done a good job with this fic! .^_-. |
| MistyTrees 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseGood story! I love your attitude towards flamers. |