So bittersweet - you had me crying. Ihope it won't be too long before their reunited.

I love this chapter! Love You Servant is absolutely the most amazing fanfic and never ceases to amaze me in every aspect of its existence. Thank you so much for updating and I hope to see the next chapter soon. Perhaps by Christmas as a Christmas present to us readers? Anyway I also wanted to tell you that never have I read a story, book, or fanfic I loved more than this one. I have now read it seven times and I never get tired of it. Thank you so much for writing this. I think I speak for all of your readers as well as my self when I say we are supporting you every step of the way with Love Your Servant. I am even currently composing a song about it on my piano and I would love to send it to you once it is done. Please do not lose hope and do not give up on this story no matter what Meleiyu. Thank you once again for without a doubt this is the best fanfic ever.

wow... that was so romantic! ur style of writing is uncommon... :) and im saying that after reading many stories of yours! i especially like your dedication to this story - which is very obvious when one reads it.

anyway... about the chapter... the inclusion of olette really kicked the pieces together - the plot goes on! also, i like how u used olette and the idea of banishing axel to demonstrate roxas's mental development - its nice to see such a nice character development!

cant wait for the next chapter!

You made me cry!
I haven't cried in a fanfiction before, and I never wanted to. Namine is pissing me off to no end. Ugh! I can't stand her!! I hate her, and this story is pissing me off, but I can't go away from it. Roxas and Axel are so perfect for eachother! I don't want them to be apart...


In otherwords, you made me glued to the story. I can't turn away till it's done. Even if it pisses me off... I will just have to dream for a happy ending. I don't see anything that needs to fixed. You have done a wonderful job. If I show this to my friends they will probably not be able to stop reading too. Very well done. Very well done.

OH MY GOSH! I have attempted to read this chapter a total of four times, because my computer kept freezing, or going glitchy... or i'd get a phone call, or... SOMETHING. But, now i can say that i have successfully finished it, and i am so glad i have, for it was beautiful. :D

Actually, i've never really played properly in the snow. :( I've been to the snow when i was a toddler, and my parents tell me that i was towed around in this miniature bath-thingy, and it tipped over once, and i fell onto the snow. I lay there on my back with my arms and legs in the air until someone came and put me back in the bath-thingy. Clearly, i didn't like snow. >< ROFLL but i'd like to go again, now i'm a tad older than that, you know? LOLOL :P

Awr!! Axel and Roxas were so gorgeous! :D I love their cute relationship - it's magical. XD But, i'm just hoping that Namine doesn't barge in on them when they're snuggled warmly in bed together. *nervous* I really hope that doesn't happen...! O__o

Okay, on to the next chapter. :D xox

xx Boat xx

brilliant! simply brilliant!!

the innocence of the lovemaking scene was amazingly written. They didn't go all the way which was very cute and fitting for the story.

and the goodbye was saddening but was so adorable at the end.

:D awaiting the update.

That was a great chapter, even though Axel and Roxas don't know how to do it. XD
But, that's probably true. How could they know how it works?
I hope you update ASAP! :D

THIS IS AMAZING! you said it would be awhile before you updated? please tell me your going to reunite Axel and Roxas before you end this! My life will be a full swing of depression forever if this doesnt happen... you have brought out so many emotions in me... thank you for this wonderful journey... but it cant end like this! They have to reunite and have their happy ending! PLEASE I BEG OF YOU! your an amazing author... Get signed if your not! =]

I look forward to your reply.

Dont stop something so wonderful... Ill cry =[

oh, im being selfish though.. dont rush either.. school is important!

If you have time to respond to me you can email me at


YOU ROCK! BEST FAN FIC EVER!

You did a good job making people cry. I BAWLED AND AM BAWLING AS I WRITE THIS.

Favorite Character... Roxas. He's just so cute and shy!

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I hope you know that you just made me squeal (silently, it's like midnight as I read this) SO MANY TIMES i'm probably going to CRY. But it's a good cry, I promise! Your fanfic is SO CUTE!

Plus, the character is good enough that I'm using it for a character study. I cosplay Roxas.

ANYwhoo... I love it. And you are my new favorite.

well you made me hold back tears so congrats. Great writing.

'ello Am just gonna take the opportunity and tell you that i like totally have want to read this storie. But i have no freaking clue how to finde stuff on FFnet O.x I just saw the title somewere on deviantART and want to check it out for so long but never really finding it T.T But so far i really like it and gonna check next chapter out, soo baba ^3^ hugglez and stuff

"“Prince Roxas!” some screamed, stretching an arm towards him."

Oh god, When I read this I was totally picturing the part in the game when Seifer shows up for the struggle match. Except with Roxas' name, obviously.
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Oh my, That was adorable, and of course still depressing, but that's the point, no?

I really liked the awkward/adorable sex. It was like... Well, it made sense, I mean in the time period you set it in, how would one know? XD
It was very good. not at all a "Lemon" since that term normally refers to just oneshots or mainly focused on the sex things.

anyways. yes.

I await the next update.

Gawd knows I love this story, and you for writing this story, but give sympathy to the people with ADD please XD Loved all of this even though it's still odd for me to think of them with these personalities. You could probably switch the names up and make this big someday...ok maybe it'd have issues in some states, but hey I'm from Canada and most of us are cool with it! :D But seriously, I would support it. Keep up the awesome chapter and try not to be crushed by school. Hopefully we'll get to see more chapters soon-ish. I wouldn't even mind if they were more shorter chapters (ADD definately wouldn't mind) Anyway sleep deprived will shuttup now.

~Tangerine