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ByLanternLight
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
[“I don’t care what he said!” Zuko continued. “I’m the Fire Lord here, and as long as we’re in my palace I get to make the rules! No sex at breakfast!”]
This is possibly the greatest punchline ever. Comedy gold.
maikofan
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOl LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
Wolfdog-Aleu
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
If my dad read this and knew that I had read it, he would so take away my computer. But that was funny.
treeflamingo
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
*cracks up* Hold on, you're going to have to wait for me to stop laughing before I can review this.

Ok. So basically, that was comedic genius, perfectly executed, and I have nothing critical to say about it whatsoever. *favorites*
arizony
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
Too funny-y-y-y-y-y-y!
blue-eyes2014
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Oh my holy...XD

This... This was just beautiful. XD Oh, the awkwardness; oh, the hilarity!

(Lol, Aang trying to initiate a conversation about intimacy. And Katara's just trying not to crack up. And Mai is frickin' awesome. And Zuko- I love you; don't ever change.)

Good work. Much love.
Ylandel
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
i believe 'rofl' is the best phrase to describe my reaction to this.
Hanyou Hitokiri
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
OMG YES!! Hurray for Avatar crack!! I was crying tears of laughter through the whole thing!! Each reaction was so believable too, which made it even more hilarious!! Excellent job!! I love it!!

And I'm still laughing!

~HH
Kataanglover13
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
I couldn't stop laughing! (ha ha ha) I want more funny stories!
Katako-Chan
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
Avatar crack is the best.

...But did it really take Zuko that long to come up with a comeback?

Hahahah, great job :D

Katako-Chan
midnightwaters
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
LOLOLOL. A typical morning in the Fire Nation palace.
The One And Only Lobster
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
You know, I have a massive headache and I'm completely nauseous, but after reading this, I don't care. I just have one comment: hahahahaha! This was great. XD
Mrs. Aang
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
L.O.L That was HILARIOUS! I'm still laughing...haha...ha...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Liooness
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
rofl, i loved it and you got the characters so right. i should have told you, i got your first story from heartslol, so thank her for faving it and me. great job
Tyan
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
AWESOME. That's what this is. *hands you a cookie*
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