The ending was sad, but I loved it anyway.
This was really good.
Naturally, I'm a sucker for all things Ian, but I liked this because it was amazing.

-Kay

Liked it!

Aww...this had me in tears!! Fantastic job! I loved it!

So sad, that Ian would choose the mission over his brother's life! But the M16 is the M16...

Great story, write more? Please? :D

-Honor

Fantastic!
It's great to see someone around is interested in exploring Ian's character a little more.
Keep up the great writing!

awesome

AMAZING! KUDOS! I like how you describe him so well!

That was so sweet. It seems so realistic and natural and you just have to sympathize with Alex and Ian. You have real skills.

Aki! You refuse to write an AR story with me and then do one on your own?! You suck!

But I did love the story.

This was beautiful - and so sad! Aw... poor Alex; and poor Ian. And the bit at the end, where he regretted not being their for Alex enough... (twinkles away a tear).

I loved it - thank you!