Sevy, I just can't find your story New Life... What's the address?

Cool

GODDAMMIT! i WANT TO READ MORE! WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT?

Hahahahah Councilwoman Hee! Great! Any more action with Hein? Keep writing!

Oooooh. Plot. Thickens. _

Man, you have my sympathy over the whole school thing. *shudder* None of my fics have been updated in ages due to uni. Grrr... But tis good to see something happening here. _

Here's where I abjectly apologize for mucking up the review pages of these two wonderful writers with my personal problems. I can only say I am truly sorry and it will never happen again. The last two chapters were excellent. You'd better not kill him off after making us care about him as a person. You hear me! Excellent writing.

Well, having just read all the reviews which I usually don't do until I'm completely done reading something because I want my review to be unbaised and not tainted by anyone's opinion, I now understand, Raine, why you've had so little time to work on our fan fic, because I don't say anything to you in complaint, but instead just blunder along writing scene after scene and waiting for you. So I am officially her much like your other co-writing partner yelling at you to help complete out fan fic.

This is a really cool story:-) You two and Lady Kayoss are really selling me on the Aki/Hein romance*g* And I understand on the school thing...I'm in high school too...it really stinks:-)

Great chapter. Very suspenseful. Good action. Comfortable dialogue between General - oops - Major Hein and Aki. I hope you two are satisfied. Now I'm feeling sorry for Major Hein.

Very good. Wiggled out of that one. March on to the next chapter. Who is sending mysterious messages to Aki?

I knew it! I saw it coming from way back.

I can see it coming. You're making Hein a human being, aren't you. Giving him a family and happy memories, instead of being a anime villian. What nerve. You're making us care about him.

Could it be the other way around? Is Hein holding you two hostage demanding that you write a good press release about him? If he is, just nod your head. I'll go get help. Good chapter, but I'm keeping a close eye on Hein and if he gets out of hand I'll shoot him myself.

I don't think Hein would waste his ice cream by throwing it at someone. Another good chapter. Good character development for Hein. If you are headed for a Hein - Aki relationship I will hunt you all down. lol.

Great chapter. And I'm glad to hear you gave the General his ice cream. No, really. This is extremely well written and I have absolutely no idea where you're headed in the plot. Keeping me on my toes, so to speak.