|Reviews for Five Spirits|
| Leelee 1/20/04 . chapter 16
Sevy, I just can't find your story New Life... What's the address?
| There Is No Spoon14 8/22/03 . chapter 22
| Dreamy Sorceress 6/26/03 . chapter 1
GODDAMMIT! i WANT TO READ MORE! WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT?
| Kenta Divina 5/1/02 . chapter 22
Hahahahah Councilwoman Hee! Great! Any more action with Hein? Keep writing!
| ntrophi 3/26/02 . chapter 22
Oooooh. Plot. Thickens. _
Man, you have my sympathy over the whole school thing. *shudder* None of my fics have been updated in ages due to uni. Grrr... But tis good to see something happening here. _
| RobertDogwood 1/12/02 . chapter 15
Here's where I abjectly apologize for mucking up the review pages of these two wonderful writers with my personal problems. I can only say I am truly sorry and it will never happen again. The last two chapters were excellent. You'd better not kill him off after making us care about him as a person. You hear me! Excellent writing.
| RobertDogwood 1/6/02 . chapter 14
Well, having just read all the reviews which I usually don't do until I'm completely done reading something because I want my review to be unbaised and not tainted by anyone's opinion, I now understand, Raine, why you've had so little time to work on our fan fic, because I don't say anything to you in complaint, but instead just blunder along writing scene after scene and waiting for you. So I am officially her much like your other co-writing partner yelling at you to help complete out fan fic.
| Rys 1/6/02 . chapter 21
This is a really cool story:-) You two and Lady Kayoss are really selling me on the Aki/Hein romance*g* And I understand on the school thing...I'm in high school too...it really stinks:-)
| RobertDogwood 12/29/01 . chapter 13
Great chapter. Very suspenseful. Good action. Comfortable dialogue between General - oops - Major Hein and Aki. I hope you two are satisfied. Now I'm feeling sorry for Major Hein.
| RobertDogwood 12/28/01 . chapter 12
Very good. Wiggled out of that one. March on to the next chapter. Who is sending mysterious messages to Aki?
| RobertDogwood 12/27/01 . chapter 11
I knew it! I saw it coming from way back.
| RobertDogwood 12/25/01 . chapter 9
I can see it coming. You're making Hein a human being, aren't you. Giving him a family and happy memories, instead of being a anime villian. What nerve. You're making us care about him.
| RobertDogwood 12/25/01 . chapter 8
Could it be the other way around? Is Hein holding you two hostage demanding that you write a good press release about him? If he is, just nod your head. I'll go get help. Good chapter, but I'm keeping a close eye on Hein and if he gets out of hand I'll shoot him myself.
| RobertDogwood 12/25/01 . chapter 7
I don't think Hein would waste his ice cream by throwing it at someone. Another good chapter. Good character development for Hein. If you are headed for a Hein - Aki relationship I will hunt you all down. lol.
| RobertDogwood 12/24/01 . chapter 6
Great chapter. And I'm glad to hear you gave the General his ice cream. No, really. This is extremely well written and I have absolutely no idea where you're headed in the plot. Keeping me on my toes, so to speak.