Awesome! I’m going to adopt this fic as a bit of personal canon. It just makes so much sense. Also, I loved how Kairi is like symbolically torn between the Sun and the Moon, and between the Sun and Pluto (though I doubt this last one was intentional XD) I see astronomy geekery everywhere XD;

Wow. I can't believe such an insignificant little thing can spawn a cute story like this. I loved every second. 8D

Oh, wow. I really liked this. You managed to make Kairi likeable in this situation (er I am totally not biased against Kairi... ^^;) and I love how she compared Axel to the sun (and the devil :P) and saw Saix as someone who was most definately not like the sun.

I never noticed that truck, but this was a really cool way to explain it in a fanfic! Great job!

Holy cow, this is great. I actually saw the link you posted on livejournal somewhere and decided to read it. I like it a lot, the way you portrayed Axel especially. :) Great work!

This story is amazingly well written! Thanks for the good read! I really like the style in which you wrote it as well as the characterization. The parts about Axel liking control and Kairi wrestling it away from him...etc... and the way she sees him XD

Its the one-shot story that makes you beg for more chapters...even though its a one-shot. ^__^ lolol. I love the truck idea. You rock! XD .. So.. I know its a oneshot but i'm going to add it to my story alert list anyways. XD

How the hell could this story go on for practically a month and not have a single review? This is just too good a piece of fanfiction to be ignored. I feel like a loser for not having read it earlier..(though I have no internet access at my house so I haven't been on since this summer...but) yeah.

I really liked how you decided to explain the whole truck wreck in the middle of the city. The place just seemed so "in-place" or something(?) for a random truck to be tossed aside on some street.

You definitely got Kairi and Axel's characters down, and thank goodness Pluto was there. (So many people forget to put Pluto!) Yes, I commend you on your work, and bow down before your power...(see? this is me, bowing...). Take care.