This is so wonderful, I really love this story. I can't get over chapter 4, because the image of her holding him, and him crying silently over the deaths of his parents was just so vivid, it was amazing!

Please update soon. It would be such a pity to stop when you're halfway through. This is one of the best UrharaxYoruichi fics I've read in a long while, and I'd really like to read more!

~Téa

This was so cool! Please update more soon!

So cute! Please continue. :D

It is interesting, though perhaps the plot moves rather slow. Urahara and Yoruichi's child versions are still plausible.

That was a really cool story!!
Young Byakuya is so cute and I love to read about Kisuke Urahara and Yoruichi when they were young! They were so cool!!
Have a good day!! Please update soon!!

O.O This story is GOOD~, NO GREAT!! You need to continue! This is almost how I always picture Yoruichi and Kisuke's friendship. Can't wait until you update.


~Meeh-san

This is great! I love how you are developing their personalities as the story progresses. It's very enjoyable to read, and fun to imagine pint-size nobles of Seireitei. Keep it up!

rofl. I have never more enjoyed a 'and that's the origin of that' story.
Damn, and his plan was so good, too. Pet a random stray cat until she can't take it any more. It is tragic we did not get to see that one come to fruition.
And again I am thoroughly enjoying this Ganju-Kukaku-Byakuya-Kisuke-Yoruichi SQUAD. They really need a shorter name than that. You got a name? The olda' folks who could totally kick every villain's ** if they just got off theirs every once and a while? Well, minus Ganju, cause he sucks? Yeah, not shorter. Hmm.

Agh, I've missed everything. Why was this not in my alert list...
Anyway, yeah, that was fantastic. And no, not OOC at all. If they acted like they normally did in this situation they would both have personality disorders. I think you merged their everyday characters with the situation really well - Urahara always spoke to me of a withdrawer, through humor or otherwise. While Yoruichi is a more confrontational kinda gal. I loved the bit about her cutting her hair. Very fitting. And that passive aggressiveness from Urahara, about it.
Gorgeous and very insightful. Not to mention sweet. Actually, I normally try not to mention that, so as not to ruin my STREET CRED, but this totally gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling.
I'd love to see more, -unspeakably subtle hint-

nice

=]

louved it.

I really love this chapter in special, yes, its more angsty that the others, but I feel the friendship between them more than in the others, and I don´t know, it´s really like when you have a good friend and you know you can trust him, I´ts like warm.

Well, thats all I want to say.

Continue soon and bye!

XD Good old knowledgeable Kisuke. Those two get along so very well... very nice!

~tally!sock~

hahahhaa love this one!! hilarious...CONTINUE

Extremely funny and cute/sweet to read! I want more!
Keep it up!

Windy

-EEK. -hack- -cough- -wheeze-
I think you just overloaded my squeeing mechanism. Seriously. It's broken. What have you done?

Oh my god.. that was so perfect in every way. I'd tell you what parts, but there is not a break in the perfectness. It is carefully consolidated perfectness. Okay, maybe the last pair of lines deserves an extra special HUG. Particularly the first, because Kisuke is a fugging -genius-.