Nice story, RAYNE RULES!!

I personally prefer Mal/River to Jayne/River, but I am still quite impressed by the story. It is very well written, and I'd say you have a decent handle on the characters' personalities. Well done.

Aw, I like this. Makes me want to read the story of both first kisses in longer versions.

It was a little short-I would have liked it if he were to have more clues along the way to remembering, but other than that, I loved it. Thank you for an interesting storyline.

that was really cute

I love it!