This should be one of the last episodes for the series finale... at least before they go off to College...
EXCELLENT!!

WHA-?! You left us hanging there! No fair! And the fic was getting SO good too!

Like, seriously, write more! You're freaking awesome!

That was absolutely HOT and so true to KyonHaruhi. Though a lemon would have made me wibble even more but that's just asking for too much now. XD

~~*Shinaka*~~

Thanks for writing this! 'Twas the best Suzumiya fic i've read thusfar, and neither Kyon nor Haruhi seemed at all out of character here. I (and the rest of the world?) definitely think that Haruhi has a thing for Kyon, and going with the idea that she 1) Doesn't realize she's God and 2) thinks that closed space is a dream state, she would certainly hit on Kyon in the situation you describe here. However, I think that if anything, Haruhi would be more forward than you describe. you write that Kyon thinks haruhi might be torturing him again, but that doesn't seem to be what you're going for here. Then again, if Haruhi had been any more forward, this story would have been even shorter, so if you ever decide to finish this scene, and consequently tell a longer story, a more forward haruhi might be appropriate. if it ever happens, i would love to read the extended version. in addition, the first two lines were brilliant, they made my day. I hope i've been some help, if i wasn't, the oh well... anyway, keep writing!

So good and great vocab

Can't believe I didn't find this sooner.

BONER-INSPIRING.

LoL if she thought this was a dream, I would love to see a next day chapter and see the interaction between kyon and haruhi. great fic

I smell a sequel XD, that was one truly amusing fic!

I'm a big fan of this "little" fic. You did a great job, I'm glad you've graced us this this story!!

As imaginative as I am, I would love it if you would indeed expound upon this scene, if of course the muses strike in that direction.

Great job!

Sg

Oh, but that was so cute! ^^ I really liked the way you portrayed Kyon here.

God damn that was HOT! *goes to see if you wrote any other hot fanfics 8D*

Only recently got into the Haruhi fandom--and I love that I happened upon this fic. I wouldn't call it very OOC--even Kyon's final actions kind of make sense. He has a habit of going-with-the-flow, sure, but then there's those other times when he takes control of himself (or the opposite, as the case may be). Fantastically good fic. Well done!
-SAT

your little author's notes slash reflection proved to be correct,
you know the whole dream, not too OOC business. they were rather in character in many ways as you reinforced Haruhi's desire and wants for a further relationship with Kyon after the whole 'first dream' closed space. i interpreted the end of the anime being their first 'date' and this goes fairly nice after it.

nice work, good use of vocab. humorous but had minor errors.

eg "you Asahina-san have" im sure it just slipped your mind, proof-reading it shall cease further mistakes.

nonetheless, thank you for the pleasant read and write more!

Really nice, somehow you got Haruhi to make out with Kyon while still keeping her personality (which most fanfics fail at), unfortunately it just got interesting in the end (I don't even mean the sex, just his "revanche" would be interesting enough)

In the end it's still one of the better fanfics here imo

OMG DOUGLAS ADAMS I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!!

Love this, love it too too too much!