The telephone conversation between Sirius and Andromeda was incredible, I loved it! Especially how you portrayed the awkward silences and their thoughts about being no better than the rest of the family, because most HP fans see them as obviously better, it was a nice twist. I wish you would've gone a little more indepth with the initial conversation between them at her flat, to get more of a feeling for the characters, but it was good. If anything, I think perhaps the beginning of Nymphadora and Sirius's relationship could be brushed up, but it was all good.

I like this a lot
but I found Sirius's last line to cross the line between poetic and corny
apart from that this is great

Very nice. A sweet little one shot. I've always liked the idea of Sirius being with Andy or Bella. Great work.

Kate

Hmm, I liked it. Very well done. I've always been a fan of this pairing, and felt that Andromeda's marriage to Ted was unjust. This would have made a perfect back-story to why she actually married him in the series.

Ahh, Andromeda and Sirius, there is no love more true in fan fiction. This could be a start of a great series.

Warm Regards,
Salohcin Silverwing, King of Bats.

Oh, this is one of my favorite pairings. It was simply lovely. Very well written and I absolutely loved the last 2 lines.

Wow. That was such an interesting idea. I really liked this story. Well written.

Wow that was cool

I'v never actually read that pairing before...interesting...well good job!