Btw already read the whole story loved it but think that it should have a sequel if u got the time but watever great story

What is the difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense.

And thats what bothers me about your story. Naruto not getting angry about being almost killed by Sasuke time and time again is something I can barely swallow, but his girlfriend leaving him for his best friend and the only thing that he thinks of is helping them? No, just no. I find it impossible that you could automatically forgive someone, anyone for that.

Now if it was he was going to help them just to kill them himself. Then I could understand and would wholeheartedly endorse.

I think they should die. They both defected the village and betrayed their closest friend.

Wow, I'm stuck here...I'm a big ShikaxTemari supporter...and even bigger NaruxSaku supporter...yet the end was SakuxSasu...gah...good story. I hated the ending, yet loved just as much. I almost kind of like the idea of Naruto being alone while Sakura and Sasuke live life together. Kind of severes his connections of being held back and lets him become stronger. Heh, I could definitely see a sequel out of this, but keeping it at this is almost as good.

o my goodness i love this story! I am a huge sakuraxsasuke fan and i love how you put them together. If you do a sequal please keep them together! you should do a sequal i think it would work real well.

DUDE.

AWESOME.

Am eating this up.

The prose is fantastic; where have you been all my life?

omg. This fanfic is absolutely amazing. Great job D

End? What do you mean? That's the ned of the fic? Then, please write a sequel, the story is realy good!

aww shika temari fluff

update soon -

aww

i really liked this, a good first chapter

update soon .

aww... i was kinda hoping sasuke came out in this chap, but oh well. This is nice. I like the temari and shikamaru parts.