it was a good one thank you hope you up date soon please

it was a good chapter thank you on to the next chapter thank you

it was a good chapter thank you on to the next chapter

thanks it is getting good on to the next chapter thanks

youare a good writer thank you on to the next chapter thanks

it is a good one thank you on to the next chapter thanks

hello, I just wanted to let you know that I just read both of these stories and loved them and am wondering if you will continue on?

thanks kalico

This looks loike this will be about as good as your first one. Please keep up the great work. And please update soon. And Please finish this story. I am hooked

just thought you ought to know that I love this story...
can't really say anything else...

Great story, I realy love it! Please write more, you are super!

oh hun! any chance you'll start this fic again? it's brilliant!

Hi

I like your story but I don't get quite every turn of it. What I want to say is, sometimes you shouldn’t cut it too short. As for this chapter: I didn't quite get is what made Severus mad again... Please try to get it beta'ed because your beta is bound to see the gaps that you can't possibly see, because you have the whole story in your had. It's like correcting your own letters. You can never do it perfectly well, because if you could find all of your mistakes, you wouldn't have made them in the first place. See what I mean? But don't let me discourage you and keep on going!

I just found this story today and read all 6 chapters. Just let me say I found it really interesting, but there has been no update in awhile. I was wondering if you had decided to drop it or if you may continue it. I just love the realitionship that was building between Snape and Potter.

loved both parts of this story and hope you'll update it soon, its been months!lol

I finished the Unexpected Visitor and caught up on this one in only one day.

I absolutely love this fic and hope that you will continue it.