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| Lynda 2008-08-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseI loved your story, especially how you incorporated conversations from different episodes and merged them into the story in a flawless manner! |
| WickedNut 2008-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseI liked most of this story. I'm not trying to be negative or anything, but what was the ending? It didn't make much sense to me, and I was a bit confused. If you could clarify it, I would apreciate it. Anyhow, good story! Keep writing. Jenna |
| Good Witch 2007-09-17 ch 6, anon. | abuseGreat story...except one thing...you need a sequel!! You can't end it like that. Pretty please? |
| lizardmomma 2007-09-17 ch 6, | abusevery good ending.. |
| Blair Cullen 2007-09-10 ch 5, | abuseLove it. Can't wait for the next chapter |
| guardian music angel 2007-09-07 ch 5, | abuseplz update! this is good! poor chris! |
| aerohead1980 2007-09-07 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter. Please update again soon. |
| lizardmomma 2007-09-07 ch 5, | abusevery good |
| Marcus1233 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, I suppose. A bit rigid in the structure. Are you round 15 years or below by any chance? The structure seemed to be typed by someone young... |
| lizardmomma 2007-09-04 ch 4, | abuseWhy would Wyatt say it's not your time yet unless he already knows when Chris's time is up. And why isn't he trying to heal him? Good job |
| penguinlover 2007-09-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseA great chapter, i liked fury Chris but I hope he isn't going to die. Please Update soon!! |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-09-03 ch 4, | abuseAww yay daddy and son issues over...sorta Pretty good you need to proofread a little more and wasn't Piper who turned into the fury not Paige just a little bit there anywhoo update soon |
| aerohead1980 2007-09-03 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. I can't wait to read more. |
| PrInCeSsFBi 2007-09-02 ch 3, | abuseOnce again it's good not great but good AND i love how you added the subtle realization that Chris looks a lot like Piper and all you know the whole cliche thing where "it dawns on them that Chris eyes were exactly like Leo's but looked like Piper" you know what i mean keep up the good work and update soon |
| charmed l0ver 2007-09-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseplease update! chris a fury? he's angry:P |