That was cute.
NO!! HUGHES DIED!!

Um...who sneezed?

woah... kind of weird. I liked it. :D

ok i guess

AH! That's so sad, but very good. You're an EXCELLENT writer, I swear, and... hm. This was just really cute, but sad. True as well. XD

Keep on writing; this idea was very original.

That was amusing.

Oh my gosh... I cried. That was so sad when he was waving goodbye... poor Maes Hughes! Great story!

wow...that was kinda sad...nice job lol

that was sweet. sad, but sweet.