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| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-30 ch 6,  | abuseOh, oh they met so early, this can't be good, can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-30 ch 5, | abuseMan talk about beginner's look, that was not bad indeed for their first race, pitty it was short could have used more action but hey, who am I to judge, please continue. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-30 ch 4, | abuseWOAHH, didn't see that coming, the Cyclonians in Dragon City that can't be good. Great chapter BTW. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-30 ch 3, | abuseYAY, the storm hawk get tehir own dragons, swet! |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-30 ch 2, | abuseShoot first, ask questions later, right on, thah is so drac, anyway nice chapter, please continue. |
| Tzeveliniu 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseSounds interesting, please continue |
| CrystalWildfyr 2008-01-29 ch 8, | abuseKeep it up! |
| CrystalWildfyr 2008-01-16 ch 7, | abuseYour wish is my command... Nothing to critisize... Keep it goin'! I'm polishing chappie 3 for Finding of the Storm (I just realized. That's a pretty lame title...) |
| Wallington M. Simpson Jr. 2008-01-09 ch 6, anon. | abuseGood chapter. I have a suggestion. Don't have anybody break out of jail. The Storm Hawks and the Cyclonians both get hauled before the Down City Council and are told in no uncertain terms that their importing of Atmos' war to the Dragon Booster world will not be tolerated. That way, they'll both have to figure out a way to still fight each other without getting caught. |
| Wallington M. Simpson Jr. 2007-11-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseDark Ace would never betray Master Cyclonis. I remember when MC gave him the Aurora Crystal to repel the attack on Cyclonia. After he did so he handed it right back to her. |
| Wallington M. Simpson Jr. 2007-08-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseOkay, this looks like a good idea. I knew somebody would do one of these sooner or later. Let me make a suggestion. When the Storm Hawks and the Dragon Booster characters describe their repective worlds to each other, keep it brief. Anybody reading this is probably familiar with both shows already. I can't wait to see the Cyclonians joining forces with Word Payne. The only question is: Who will betray who first? |