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Dango Queen
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
Please continue
White Eye Lover
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
This is a good start. A little depressing, but still a good start.

The only thing i would suggest is that you need to break up your paragraphs more. There too long and its hard to read them when there in block form like that. Start a new one if the chapter exeeds about 5-7 lines. As well as when a new person talks, or theres a new train of thought, or change of scenery.

Other than that, its good.

Update ASAP. Well, i mean, if your still doing this story, coz it hasent been updated in, like, a few years. XD.

White Eye Lover.

P.S. There is something really creapy, i read you profile, and we have the same nick-name:
Shan-Chan. Weard huh? XD
iHearts
2007-12-15 . chapter 1
please update soon, this story seems real interesting!
black and beautiful
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
i like this chapter
can't wait for another great chapter
monkey-101
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
great chapter loved it please update asap.
well done congrats.
:)monkey-101(:
Mel
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
Wow! That was a great chapter and now I am really intrigued. I will be very interesting to find out what is going on and to see where this story goes. I can't wait til the next chapter.
Illusional Cupcake
2007-09-23 . chapter 1
What's gonna happen!? Plz make another chapter!
HannahSakura.Pinoy
2007-09-07 . chapter 1
Awesome! ^-^
Kicking You
2007-09-03 . chapter 1
Please update soon I really love this story.UPDATE PLEASE!
Peach Tuesday's
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
this is cool so far :]]
so sakura went into prostution to help her village
great chapter!
update soon please!
Hiei's Cute Girl
2007-08-30 . chapter 1
Interesting... (
Amory Blackwood
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
wow. sakura as a **. this is going to be a good one. poor gaara, finding her like that after so long.
Kenya
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really interesting! I look forward to your next update!
Shade
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
Very interesting, though rather depressing at this point. Can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon!
Later
Sakura LOVE shadow
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
OMG! Update soon i wanna know what happens next really good!
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