gr8 story! i really enjoyed it! are you planning on making a third part? if you already wrote it, is it posted on your website? i looked on your profile and it didn't say anything about your website with these stories posted on them. i just want to know so that i can read the last part of your trilogy.

Okay, yes, this is a bit of a Mary-Sue. And I know that you already know that.

But I think that it's a rather enjoyable Mary-Sue, so, yeah. The only thing I have to say is that the chapters are a bit short.

This was a great chapter, although very short... Hope to see another update soon!

Elven at Heart

PhD. Also known as Piled Higher and Deeper. In other words, not good at all. Boring overdone plot, Mary Sue, Legolas OOC.

rating 3/10 or not good.

Pedin i phith i aníron, ar av-belil nin heniad. Dôl lîn lost!! Edro i phairf a hain isto!

Ego! Edlethio o ndôr nîn!

Nallon an aphaded nín!

Goodness me, chill out WendWriter, as much as I respect your works, everybody is entitled to write what they please.

:) anybob

I like the story so far, and yes I do dub as quite Mary Sueish but hey, i'm not complaining :)it's good. Perhaps a bit more indepth description would be the icing on the cake.

Happy Writing

Jess.