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Reviews for: Aftershock
Beth Pryor
2007-11-11 . chapter 1
In case you haven't noticed, I had a little "read and review" time today. This is another one I missed reviewing when it was posted. Of course, the story is so well-executed. Like the perfect pass play or a tricky little end around that breaks the tailback free for six. I always appreciate and try to be sure to commend the perfect characterizations that you always write. You've covered the entire show here, and everyone is spot on. I also appreciate how you've turned me back on to this show when I had all but written it off toward the end of last season. I don't know what you do for a living, but you need to get your butt to Hollywood and write, for real!
Maryilee
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
I loved all of this, but I think my favorite part was Mrs. Street's part. Nobody has really written anything from her pov and you did a really nice job with it.
Moderndaydrifter
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
Nice one shot for UFF! I like how you wrote Coach's guilt out about Jason and how he thought he was the reason Jason was out on the field that night. Wonderful job...UFF is turning out to be a wonderful day! :-)
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