 Dragon of Yin and Yang 2009-11-06 . chapter 1Loved the story. Please continue. |
 Artemis1000 2009-11-02 . chapter 9I love the characterisation in this fic. It's very interesting to watch all these different humans and bots react in their own ways to Amanda and of course, her react to them. I think my favourite chapters were the Bluestreak and Sunstreaker chapters. You write Sunstreaker's tough shell and underlying vulnerability very well. I'm glad Amanda forgave him, he really needs a friend. |
 Darkness Revolution 2009-10-25 . chapter 9Aww so sweet. But there was not as much bee as expected. |
 Darkness Revolution 2009-10-25 . chapter 6Ya Bee and Bluestreacker! Now all we need is Prowl! He is the ninga! (literly he knows the mairtials of cybertron.) |
 Darkness Revolution 2009-10-25 . chapter 4I think the doctor should be Susan, cause that works for her. Will she meet Rachet and will they talk in depth about medical stuff? |
 Darkness Revolution 2009-10-25 . chapter 3I love humor. And her is funny full. |
 Isis the Sphinx 2009-09-27 . chapter 9Interesting. Certainly a different VIEWpoint, (yeah I know bad joke) but brilliantly written none the less. Keep writing! |
 Karasu Kagami 2009-07-28 . chapter 3Worst thing is, i have that humor.
I was a premee with oodles of issues. So evertime someone goes what wrong with you?! I have a list. With all sorts of medical history to back it up. Then they feel guilty. And i laugh at them. My family just wack me on the head. Meanies. =p
Love the fic, Amanda's amusing. |
 won't be the Victim 2009-05-22 . chapter 9Cute story i really enjoyed reading it! |
 KimTheKat 2009-03-23 . chapter 9awe, that was an adorable FF. |
 Ookami Aya 2009-03-16 . chapter 9Aww! I kept going "Aww!" through most of this. |
 BMT and SuperMoose 2009-03-11 . chapter 9This is a fantastic story! I love the way the characters interacted and how Amanda reacted to everyone. The ending was awesome; I'm glad you posted this. |
 The Transdresser 2009-03-11 . chapter 9Ooh, Im liking this story very much so far! I cant wait for more! Good luck on your future works :D |
 Meiza 2009-03-09 . chapter 9*claps* Yay, you finished it!
So exciting, Amanda lost on the battle field. Grr, Sunny you jerk! *shakes fist*. But I know he didn't do it to be cruel. He's just stupid like that. I also liked the 'apology' such as it is.
"Amanda. It's Sunstreaker...Sideswipes an ass." XD!
I like how Amanda never really forgives Sideswipe for what he did. It makes her human, more real.
My only complaint is that the ending is rather...strained. It feels more like Amanda, Mirage, and Jerry were just going through the motions.
Thank you so much, it was a wonderful ride! :) |
 flamingmarsh 2009-03-08 . chapter 9what a great ending. :)
I enjoyed this story.
I think I'll read it over again. |