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| Narnian Sprite 2008-06-15 ch 7,  | abuseWonderful story! I'm not sucking-up, I swear. I just thought it would be a good idea to see what sort of things you wrote, and I'm very glad I did! Write more soon! |
| Mujamo 2008-04-16 ch 7, | abuseMan, I completely missed this chapter... must've sent my alert to bulk mail or something. Freakin sweet that I check up on this story and find a new chapter. I love her reaction to Bluestreak and how she understood that he was nervous. Reading this story is like being in the story watching it happen. I can't wait to read more. |
| Atalan 2008-04-07 ch 7, | abuseYAY Bluestreak. You write his dialogue (monologue? ^_^) exactly the way I like it. :) And I love that throwaway comment about the cassettes and other smaller Transformers. ... it's got to be Sunny, hasn't it? |
| Carmilla DeWinter 2008-04-06 ch 7, | abuseSo, Sunny? Anyhow, another nice chapter, and I really like how you portray Bluestreak. |
| ViolentBigGrl 2008-03-26 ch 7, | abuseIt's definitely Sunstreaker, just by the way he says "What the slag are you doing?" |
| mmouse15 2008-03-20 ch 7, | abuseOK, now that I'm not flat on my back sick, I'm catching up on my reading. If I didn't tell you this before, I love this chapter! I think it's your best yet, just because of Bluestreak and Jerry. You did an amazing job of catching Bluestreak's run-on style of talking, and Amanda's thoughts during his monologue were hilarious. Great job. |
| Ookami Aya 2008-03-17 ch 7, | abuseOoh! Ooh! Is it Sunny? I do hope it's Sunny. He's my friend. Sunstreaker: I am not. And don't call me that. I love you too, Sunny. Sunstreaker: Frag off. Tee hee. Feel the love! |
| AMAPADME 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuseoh nice story. I love how you make her freaked out over the corse of the story. I know it is one day and really irks me when people write human /mech contact and the human is like "ok robot aliens sounds good to me." So I am not a very good guesser but is it Sideswipe. If it is she will NEVER like the Autobots. |
| Ladyofthebookworms 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuseIt seems to be generally agreed upon that being able to talk without breathing allows for much longer sentences. |
| Bluebird Soaring 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuseAnother sweet chappy, this time with one of my favorite bots (right after Ironhide) Blue! I wonder if Prime sent him over to talk with her, or if they just happened upon each other? Seems like a good choice since his nature would be more likely to put her at ease. He has got to be one of the least imposing bots of the whole lot...and the return of Siders for the win! |
| Library Drone SAR 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuseI love this story. I agree with amanda, it must be extreemly agrivating to have her disability constantly poked at. I can't wait for the next update. |
| AyameKitsune 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuse*Grins* This fic rocks! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ |
| Eerie Iri 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuseThis is a great story! |
| caz 2008-03-16 ch 7, anon. | abusehide? lol |
| blood shifter 2008-03-16 ch 7, | abuseSUNSTREAKER! please say yes? please say its him. this outta be good. please update soon. |