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LabRat
2007-10-14
ch 15, anon.
abuseHi, I just wanted to say I really enjoyed your story. I've been following it for weeks but this is the first time I've submitted a review. I normally only read K/L but this story "sucked" me in and I really enjoyed how the focus was on the kids and how they effected the fleet and the family dynamics. Anyway, I'm not much of a reviewer but I wanted to say good job and I'll keep my eye out for your next story. Thank you for sharing.
Earthia
2007-10-14
ch 15,
abusei really loved the story.
it has a great storyline, as did the Brave.
I hope that perhaps you might continue
with the series.

-earthia
Dearheart
2007-10-13
ch 15, anon.
abuseI have followed this story and I enjoyed reading it. It's a shame that it was so short though. Are you considering doing another sequel? I hope that you are - it would be good to see where these characters would continue to go.

Good work. Keep writing.
Dearheart
darkfinder
2007-10-13
ch 15,
abuseglad for the update but will there be more and will they make it to earth .
darkfinder
2007-10-13
ch 14,
abuseseems lot revolved around kacy .
Aliajacta
2007-10-13
ch 15,
abuseVery nice! I liked the scene with Kacey and Leoben. It adds a lot of depth to the characters. I know I haven't posted many reviews this time (busy too!) but I have been looking forward to each chapter with eagerness, and you haven't disappointed. But now it's done! Do you have more up your sleeve? I hope so. January's a long time to wait!
3.Hill
2007-10-13
ch 15,
abuseAw! I've loved this story! It's so great! *hugs*
Artemis90
2007-10-13
ch 15,
abuseThanks for the story!

I miss little Kacey in the series . Goodness knows where the weries could have gone with her around...

I favorite part was when little Zak was surprised when Kacey hugged him! Sibling Rivalry solved. Not sorry about Uri though ... but if he's not dead ... will he choose to go after them later ... ? (hint hint)
darkfinder
2007-10-09
ch 13,
abusehera's mom comes out very little .
darkfinder
2007-10-04
ch 12,
abuseSO LITTLE OF SHARON . wonder what she is doing . glad for the update .
Artemis90
2007-10-03
ch 12,
abuseHow interesting! Cylon Civil War!

Leoben has evolved? But enough? or is it a mind-frak?

So at the beginning Kasey had sibling rivalry issues with little Zak, but now it seems that URI is the one with the rivalry issues. Is he redemmable?

Curiouser and curiouser!

Please continue!
TamSibling
2007-10-03
ch 12,
abuseKacey was right before - Leoben doesn't know what love is - he knows what guilt is. He's trying to put the responsibility of all of the Cylons' actions on Kacey's small shoulders. Wait until Kara finds out about that - she's going to lay into him something fierce. Regardless of her role in showing the Cylons what's truly important, Kacey is only a child. Somehow I don't think Jesus was expected to save the masses at the age of eight. He didn't do his really important work until he was 30 - a full-grown adult who had accepted his role in the saving of humanity. Kacey deserves at least the same consideration.

And Uri is dangerous. They need to watch him. I hope he goes to find Kara - maybe she can talk some sense into him.
darkfinder
2007-09-28
ch 11,
abuseglad for the update . wonder how hera is taking all this . if the found out about KJ . also been wondering how the models treating sharon .
TamSibling
2007-09-28
ch 11,
abuseSomething tells me Uri's thoughts are going to revolve around killing his newfound sister ... Leoben should have kept his frakking mouth shut! The scene with Lee and Zak was adorable - that little boy's right - his father can't disapper on him too.
Aliajacta
2007-09-28
ch 11,
abuseAh, so creepy! I'm interested by your explanation of the evolution and the fracturing of the cylon unity - looking forward to seeing where you take that. I'm also interested to see how the Kacey-Leoben relationship works out. I hope Uri decides to take out his angst on dear old dad! It would be poetic justice.
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