Reviews for When the stars go blue and her eyes are on you

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vlengel555 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuselove it
Soulmates Never Die 2008-02-22 ch 4,	abuseWow, this was really good. I have to say, it is one of the most-well written fics that I've read on here. You have this amazing quality to your writing, it's all very poetic and brilliant. Great story, keep writing =]
soulmatesDC 2007-11-09 ch 4,	abuseI loved the whole 'behind the scenes' feel of this chapter. Like there was just SO MUCH to be said, but words wouldn't really do it justice. "You’re looking for that one person-even though he was right beside you-to share and bask in the glow of another magnificent performance and yet, when you get down to the last place within your search-you stand alone. All alone, now. And tonight was your last performance for the year, too. You laugh." There is just so much one can get out of this. The fact that she's alone presently, and I think in her dreams as well. Because it seems that she didn't really know what she wanted. She wanted so much, so damn much, and although Ryan seemed to only want her, it wasn't enough and in the end she has no one but herself. And poor Ryan. I love that kid. I didn't even realize this was the last chapter . . . I'm sad now.
FanofInulover 2007-11-09 ch 4,	abuseIt took me awhile to get the courage to read this, fear that had inevitably caught up with me because assumptions were made correct within this last chapter. Why do you have to go and kill off all your characters? what happened to the promises that you'd be different and allow them to be happy? I challenege you...make a story where they end happy...as much as I love this stories for you and their dark and compelling nature...i want something to look forward too that I know would give that warm sensation in the end...please?
pinklillies 2007-11-09 ch 4, anon.	abuseBut you hold on regardless, because the golden haired love of your dreams is no more. Dud Ryan die?! Oh, You suck! (awesome story, wow. so morbid and sad)
UchihaHakura64 2007-11-07 ch 4,	abuseThis was a really good ominous ending. I love how you did it. All in all, a great story.
LanaLangKent 2007-11-05 ch 4,	abuse"Have you ever loved someone so much you convince yourself it’s not a sin? Even when you know it is. Please, I beg you, tell me-you love me." This is perfect... The whole thing is beautifully written: they both are trying to convince themnselves that it is just acting and they can make it go away but really they cant because they were made for each other. Oh yeah, and kudos for the ambiguity.
Newsiefreak172 2007-10-30 ch 4,	abuseWow. You are an absolutly amazing writer. The words, the form... everything about your work is great. A masterpiece (of fanfictions, at least). :):) The way you get a message across... the emotions you put into your work... so great. Simply wonderful work. Great job. You deserve all the praise, because this is an amazing job. You took something that's construed as not right and made a masterpiece. :):) Absolutly great. :):) ~Jordyn~
Rawr4cookies 2007-10-30 ch 4,	abuseHalf of a heart can never hope to live on alone for too long. - Oh, how the days are endless, without you. - I think I'm crying... I also love how you changed the title and put "his" instead of 'hers' to show how the story up until thelast was in ryan's POV but then-when he's gone, it shifts to his twin. So, Mother? Father? - Why can’t I stop acting when the lights go out? - AH! woman! too mmuch tears!!
jannikajade 2007-10-30 ch 4,	abuseThe world is my stage. And he was just my co-star. Guh. You kill me. That line is so.. perfect. So them. And I loved it. I loved every last word of this chapter. You're amazing and I love you. This made for a perfect bedtime story(I had to go find this btw-I didnt' get this alert again! gr) Really, so sad: Half of a heart can never hope to live on alone for too long. Wow. Thats amazing stuff love. amazing.
Idio-cynic 2007-10-29 ch 4,	abuseI adore the poetic feel this last chapter has and cutting between POVs. It kind of gives it this choppy feeling of being pushed through multiple people’s heads. And wait, it’s over? Sigh, much? You’re a fantastic writer. Good luck with NaNoWriMo!
SkyHighFan 2007-10-29 ch 4,	abuseGood but why haven't you updated Just Smile?
soulmatesDC 2007-10-21 ch 3,	abusewow. The whole book comparison to her life, as if it's a play for both Sharpay and Ryan to reenact, amazing. She really is an actress, completely, fully. I love how she had to reread what is in the book to make sure that everything went as planned. You amaze me. love you ~Mal
FanofInulover 2007-10-17 ch 3,	abuseThis was simply beauty and amazingly well done, I give an applause to you because I love and feel for Ryan in this. this line in particular: The way she flips through the pages makes my heart ache, she’s so gentle with each turn, with the paper that holds no feeling and would hold no remorse if she decided to rip it in two as opposed to when she carelessly cuts my heart in half, not another thought on it. Made me weep. Because Ryan is -so- Ryan...and Sharpay disregards him like a lost puppy and...**. im so mad, becausei want her to love him, and like you said in this chapter, "And I can’t help but think, its love she just doesn’t quite get." and how can you do something you don't understand?
jannikajade 2007-10-15 ch 3,	abuseI swear I didn't get this alert. So this was love. Its amazing. The image of Ryan watching her read is magic. It makes me smile so much. Love and more love.

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