that was pretty damn good. A Gothic fairytale that didn't turn out cheesy or lame. Kinda hard to do sometimes.

It's like a poetry!
Good job +w+b

aww is so cute i really like it

wow. Quite brilliant how you managed to incorporate all those fairy-tales. slightly guesome, but just the right amount of angst. And a good ending too, which, I always say, is the hardest and most important.

I really liked your story. Especially how you weaved the fairy stories all together.

That end was the best one I've ever read from those two. AxI

Really, really, out of character, but I'm guessing that was the point.

Weird, but good.

I seriously liked this fic, loved the ending.

I really like the way you wrote this fic, and the ending was very good.

I'll be checking for more A&I fics of yours in the future, so write another soon.