amazing story, although i think it's a tad bit depressing.
there's 2 things your story made me realize, you know?

one is,
that although Edward keeps repeating that Bella doesn't understand the meaning of "Forever" he doesn't really understand what it means not to have it. Ithink he just doesn't get what Bella's so afraid of, and he doesn't realize that one day she won't be there anymore. sure, he knows that, but he just doesn't get it, you know what i mean?
the second thing i realized was when i read that part:

“He shouldn’t,” I said quietly, as we started to head out of the parking lot. “He knows how much I love him.” So much that it hurts, I thought.
Alice looked at me meaningfully. “I know.”
i think, that he just *doesn't* know how much she really loves him, not really. if he just saw how much she loves him, that she's willing to die for him, that she would trade her life to be with him and do it gladly. i think he doesn't see that.

okay, so i always interpret more in a story than there is too it, but still xD

great story^^

Just lovely :)

So good! Thank you!

you have to continue this i am officially hooked !

Loved the end! It was so sweet.

That was really amazing! I liked the argument between Bella and Edward becausse I always thought that she asked, but she didn't really push. She said she wanted immortality, but whever he denied her, she just let herself be kissed and held and forgot about it. So - awesome job!

luv2read

I love the title. That's deep.

The writing was awesome. Really professional. I didn't see one error (spelling/grammar) at all. Meyers could have written this herself. (That's a huge compliment by the way)

I didn't want it to end. I'm saving this author under my favorites.

This was great :) well written and reminded me how much Jacob aggravates me lol.

I love it when Edward's emotions are shown in such a way. How jealous he gets and how much Jake's presence truly bothers him. How they speak of forever, or even when Edward said it was all a game. It was truly just beautiful. And the things that Jacob said was perfect so I had a few "Oh snap! He went there!". But yea, really amazing.

OK, that was a really open ending! Are you going to continue it, or is it a use-your-own-fantasy-to-work-out-the-ending-thing? :) Just asking. Great fic though.

HarryPotter4Evah

I loved it, but I am a little confused as to what "his one hundred years of snow finally came to an end" means, I think I know, but I just want to be sure. 6 stars! :D

That was so sweet and perfect! I felt like I was actually reading one of the books! Meep!

really well written...great job!

I'm awestruck. This was beautiful. =)

What a beautifully written story! I loved all the emotion coming off both Edward and Bella. It felt real to me. I half expected an Edward/Jacob all out fight there for a moment, but you managed to just make things tense enough I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, without having to resort to violence. LOL. Well done!