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magdilen
2008-08-31
ch 5,
abuseGood job- this was a lot of fun to read. I hope you did or will do a story about the Rick issue.
Samps432
2008-07-01
ch 5,
abusethat was adorable! great story, i liked it a lot. though i was curious, what did acutally happen to Riley's brother? Anyway, great job!
mykneazle
2008-06-28
ch 5,
abuseThat was ... beautiful. *sniff* Such a great ending. I really enjoyed this one. And I totally want one of those jackets.
Reggie Lottering
2008-04-16
ch 5,
abuseWell. That wasn't exactly a one-shot, but it read like one. Nicely done, not too stretched out, and I liked the little "Riley's a hero" theme thingy you had going on... it was cute.
sj9
2008-02-14
ch 5,
abuseloved it loved it lol :D
Hannah
2008-02-04
ch 5, anon.
abuseGreat story, realy sweat friendship moments.
TheSecretDoor
2008-01-30
ch 5,
abusewow great fic! the part with Riley being a dog's name was hilarious!
MikiNare
2008-01-27
ch 5,
abuseI loved this fic a lot. I can't tell you how amazing you write Riley and Ben. It rocks. Thanks. XD
Majestik Moose
2008-01-16
ch 5,
abuseYou capture Riley's character so well.
I love it!
You should definately write more.
Brilliant!
cuteswede
2008-01-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it!! Brilliant masterpiece...hehe. =) Really, you are one of the best "Riley" writers out there!! I'm so happy! lol! I'll keep reading your other fics now! Thanks for a wonderful story!!
smudgeworthy
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseSame drill as the other review I sent.
Sorry about the mix up. >.
Queen of the Dammed
2008-01-09
ch 5,
abuseThat was wicked.

Beautifully written, and well characterized. I loved Riley's back story, too.
shaen a. poole
2008-01-06
ch 5,
abusei absolutely LOVE your stories! you really and truly inspire me. the way you portray ben and riley's friendship has really helped me with my fanfic that i'm writing (hopefully will be posted soon on here).
Durithyll
2008-01-02
ch 5, anon.
abuseaw! that was sweet!! i loved it! i love your stories! they're so well written!!
Jossi-kun
2008-01-01
ch 5,
abusethat was cute, i loved it^^
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