Akari: Lolz my timing is perfect! I jut started reading this chapter as the theme song for CSI stared playing on my tv!

Hmmmm, a FMA/CSI crossover; never thought of putting these two fandoms together before, but I like where you're going so far. I also like it that Grissom's first theory wasn't "OMG, these kids are from another universe!" but instead something that makes a surprising amount of sense giving what he knows.

This is a good story... you managed to make me suspend disbelief for 20 whole chapters (the blatant mention of plotholes might have something to do with it though) and I'm prepared to suspend for more chapters, at least until it finishes.

So keep it up... and I have the same problem with Delta and American as you do with Northwest.

Just for your information. The concept of the double helix for DNA, came to the scientists while they were on LSD at the time. So I wouldn't put down hallucinations...

Well, well, a young!Ed and Al story. And so wonderfully put together! Recently, seemingly strange crossovers like these have become a favorite of mine, and this one already has me curious how you're going to bring it all together... and, what's more, you have it tagged as 'complete'! XD Off to the next awe-tastic chapter!

I loved the whole thing! Except for that last chapter was confusing...

Did you see the cliffhanger for Ep. 99? That one's also really evil

*counts on fingers* Edward abduction number five! It gets redundant after a bit, no offense...

I'm still enjoying the story!

Grissom: "I hope we're not too late."

The question is: too late for whom? :O

*off to read more*

I knew something bad would happen when they left Ed home...

Now to find out what the something bad is...

*reads*

This is what?...*counts on fingers* the fourth time Ed's been kidnapped over the course of this fic?

I love how you keep acknowledging your own plotholes (how does that portal thing work? Very plot-devicish...That's probably the only thing that's really bothering me in this story...)

I'm enjoying this story so far. I hope they catch that one guy (if there's any people I really hate, it's pedophiles)...

The only times I ever watch CSI are when my family members are watching it, but I love how everyone from both stories seems to be mostly in character...I think I may have caught some OOCness but I can't remember where it was.

The heck. I've been so into this I haven't reviewed until now, lol! :D

ha ha ha ha I really liked this story! I loved how it was kind of serious and kind of not! One question, who was the poink-haired kid at the end?

i loved this story! it was great! 20bagillion thumbs up (i'm well aware that that isnt a real number XD) great job again _

How on earth did you get such a random crossover to work so well? It was amazing.. oo

Favourited!

Can I just say this is an awesome fic, and I don't even watch CSI? But it's manga-based too... ::happy sigh::. This was a joy to read, even if it is really kinda depressing. The extra was nice too. :)

Envy did turn into Ross but since Maes was fighting back so easily he turned into Gracia and killed him. so it wasn't Ross it was Maes own wife...well his wifes look a like.

oh but a nine year old and an eight year old did understand it