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| ChicagoBears23 2008-04-05 ch 4,  | abuseThis chapter made me tear up a bit, this is a good chapter. Oh I've changed the spacing for Sky's The Limit 2: Leyon's Revenge, check it out. I'm dedicating Sky's The Limit 3: Chaotic Century to you, and this other guy who reviewed my stories. Don't worry the spacing will be cleared up, I'm still new to this site. |
| ChicagoBears23 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was the greatest Bit and Leena love story ever! I thought I was the only one who thought Bit and Leena could date. Excellent writing. I have no complaints. I've written one about Bit and Leena except is not surrounding their whole relationship. It's called Sky's The Limit. I made a sequel too. Check it out. This site should give out awards, cause you deserve one! |
| GrimlockX4 2007-10-19 ch 5, | abuseAwesome romance story with Bit and Leena. |
| Narya100 2007-09-21 ch 5, | abuseI live this story and shot is sometimes nescerrery(sorry) Trust me it just makest he next chapter better. |
| requim17 2007-09-15 ch 5, | abusei couldn't possibly think of a sequel. unless leena dares brad to date naomi for a week or something.. i can't think how ur going to continue the relationship. we already had our wonderful kissing scenes and hanging out with each other moments. wait!...nope still got nothing. hope someone else runs a good idea by you. brad getting beaten up was hilarious. OH. WHAT IF you made a parallel type thing... but had brad dare her to go out with HARRY for a week? (she would still end up falling for bit of course). well thats my wild stab at an idea. hope u write a new story soon! |
| Player Zero 2007-09-14 ch 5, | abusenice story, for a sequel, how about, turn about is fair play you could have bit and leena, do something to brad and naomi. |
| PokeRangerArdith 2007-09-10 ch 4, | abuseAWESOME chapter. please update soon! i can see a sequel, but of course its up to you. GREAT JOB. |
| Player Zero 2007-09-10 ch 4, | abuseFor the love santa, update soon! haha |
| PokeRangerArdith 2007-09-09 ch 3, | abuseWOW!! A Zoids LABL story that is really, really, really good! in fact Consider it faved! update soon.. now if possible! keep up the good work! UMM.. i know its a bit (no pun intended) early but will there be a squeal (sp?) |
| requim17 2007-08-31 ch 2, | abuseheh. brad was like a demon or plotting evil doer at the end there. i liked the first chapter better but this was cute. and...leena and bit dressed in black?? ok, i'll take it. i'm actually writing a oneshot of my own for you!! (also for two others.. but i don't actually -talk- to them as much) It's a little untraditional from the BL's i've read. i'm close to finishing. hopefully i can finish it tonight. going to do that right now. and.. hopefully the characters are less...OC?...in the next chapter. they weren't exactly OC per say, but its the best word i can think of. ^.^ totally glad you write so much |
| Player Zero 2007-08-29 ch 2, | abuseAwesome, one of the best bit/leena fics I've ever read! Update Soon! |
| Player Zero 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusehaha sweet, update soon! |
| requim17 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseYes! Finally! i am definitely having the same emotions as those two. you made both of them excited! glad to hear it. proves that they secretly like each other. (very secretly) i think i'm going to like this. and i like how bit was making fun of it and leena felt a bit awkward, seems exactly how that would happen between a boy and a girl. alright ms-printing-press, once again i'm applauding you on a good first chapter. (i can't believe you write so much--its amazing!) hope you update soon! |