holy carp you have a way with words but Al and integar.. wow

It's good, and not out of character. I really like it.

Oh, btw, I wonder how Alucard looked. Poor Alucard, he'd be disappointed. Work comes first, that's Integra's motto. *sigh*



Please, oh please, add a sequel.

Just like it would. The annoying reality that interrupts all sorts of fun

wow, this is pretty good

Oh, this is what normal could be for them, but for duty... There are so many things I enjoyed about this fic. The sunlight imagery almost seemed overdone, but you kept it within bounds. Seriously, I can't pick out any one thing, because I'd be listing your whole fic back at you.

I've just started reading your fics, and I really like your style. You capture moments without going to far, and you keep everyone in character. So, consider yourself perhaps +1 stalker.

Don't dare tell me you are not going to continue this fic! IT'S NOT FAIR!

I don't think you need to pursue perfection with this fic. It's already there. Actually, it possibly isn't total perfection.. You could add a sequel... ;)

You HAVE to finish this! It's just to good to leave open like that. ^_^

This was well-written. The contrast of a young, growing, mostly-innocent Integra trying to flirt with...well, *Alucard*. Despite all his energy and enthusiasm, there is very clear restraint there, and you make it clear that he's not trying to take advantage of her. Rather, their relationship has shifted now that she's not a little girl anymore, and she'll have to deal with that.

But as always with Integra...work comes first. I get the impression she won't let this happen again, to his intense disappointment.

Ah, you write very very well =] This was cute, keep it up!

Silly, she had Alucard all to herself and this is what she does? My God, the woman is dense. Young, but dense. Anyways! That was a really awesome story! I loved it so much and I have a question. Will there be more? I hope so! Because I love this very, very much and really hope you update!

That was great~! And isn't it so obvious how Alucard loves her?
Anyway, amazing work, you write so well =]

Encore! Wonderful! Very sexy ;)
Poor Alucard...imagine his expression...though I think in the longrun he'd just be encouraged to try again. ;-D

oh my god! i love that story! wow! that was hot.

That's awesome!