 Mariagoner 2009-09-27 . chapter 1Mm... this is so delicately erotic I just want to write 'm' over and over and over again. I love how you hint at what Itachi (who is described in MELTING terms) did with Hinata (who is just so adorable here!) without resorting to smut or filthy euphemisms. This was so intriguingly sexy! Won't you PLEASE write a full-bore lemon for them sometime soon? This was just too good... ;) |
 blackraven615 2009-06-24 . chapter 1Ah ah! Wow. |
 otherrealmwriter 2008-12-24 . chapter 1Sweet. :) Short but it was sweet. Espically at the end. |
 Estheriana 2008-12-10 . chapter 1great i hope you will post another itahina drablle there is never enough of them since its not particulary popular pairing |
 JadedGothButterfly 2008-11-08 . chapter 1Eloquently Written.It Made Me...*Blush* |
 Bonds Of Hatred 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Not much it it? - you better shuddup now. It was really nicely written even thought it was a few words okay? I was a beautiful story! ItaHina! |
 realityfling18 2008-09-11 . chapter 1love it |
 SecretBox 2008-01-19 . chapter 1"Not much is it?" < -- Shut up, just shut up right. NOW.
I wish I could pull something like this off, lol. I find it absolutely amazing how you are able to express so much in so little of words. It was just really pretty -- wtKupo? o.O -- and extremely hot. Did I mention sexy? 'Cause it totally was. ;D
You should write a multi-chaptered ItaHina fic just because Seriously. I know I'd read it. |
 Madyson 2007-12-15 . chapter 1Not much? Jesus christ, I don't think any other writer could could pull something so amazing in so few words! On a scale of one to ten, this story is a five thousand! |
 Hinataluver203 2007-10-31 . chapter 1 As u said not much but WOW!! thats so... so...SWEAT!! I luv a good Itahina story!! |
 Chrysalix Amour 2007-10-29 . chapter 1Very nice.
:)
~Grace |
 aussie girl1990 2007-09-13 . chapter 1I loved this, it was cute and hot at the same time. I wish there were more of this pairing.
Jessica |
 Apple Of The Sand 2007-09-10 . chapter 1No, you're right. It's not much. But I really like the way it was written regardless, and the implications are (mostly) enough for my imagination! ^_^ Great fic! |
 Anonymous 2007-09-04 . chapter 1 GOOD. |
 ashdrew27 2007-08-30 . chapter 1I like it I think you should right a story to go with it like what happened befor or after this meeting just a thought oh well I really liked it |