 RavenxRiku 3/25/12 . chapter 9Please continue the story I was really gettin into it. :) |
 hopekills16 7/7/08 . chapter 9it's good update soon please |
 Codescipio 1/11/08 . chapter 9I prefer Pirates of the Carabian, Jack could get a keyblade!
Actualy me & my friends came up w/ a story were not gana publish we were gana use these worlds
Pirates 3
Star Wars Empire strikes back
Peter Pan
Naruto
Final Fantasy X-2
Final Fantasy XII
A person from each got a Keyblade
Jack
Luke
Peter Pan
Naruto & Sasuke
Yuna
Vaan
We also came up with & princesses of Battle instaed of Heart
Elizabeth Swan
Leia
Sakura
Ashe
Yuna
Kairi
Yuffie, Tifa, of Areith
If you like any of these ideas fell free to use them, though you probably wont, stll. |
 Codescipio 11/13/07 . chapter 8That was good, wrighting out of order isn't bad...so long as you put it in order be4 posting it.
When are they going into the 1st world? |
 Codescipio 11/5/07 . chapter 72 words-code lyoko world. They could go on lyoko and well... ok I don't know. |
 Anonomous 10/27/07 . chapter 7 I understand now.
Even if its short its still good!
I'll be waiting for the next part! Keep Writing! |
 Fighter le Faye 10/26/07 . chapter 7Now I sense tension. Lol, sorry. The suspense...(sighs). And watch your spelling there, only saw one word but people get REAL picky with that. |
 Codescipio 10/8/07 . chapter 6Only one thing to say... .. . . .!
PLease dont take so long to update again. |
 Anonomous 10/8/07 . chapter 6 Amazing! this is going really well!
Opinion: I love how Kairi is wanting to fight, but your also making Riku and Sora sound really Sexist. Just a thought...
Great story! Keep writing! |
 Fighter le Faye 10/7/07 . chapter 6Whoa, that was good! |
 Inyx Dawn 10/5/07 . chapter 5Update soon! |
 Codescipio 9/20/07 . chapter 5Wow the number of your reviers has a huge difference then in Code Moon but, it will go up.
I like the fact of Sora acting like a mother to Kairi being overly protective and all, it makes it funny.
I have 1 request... please give Kairi a new Keyblade ASAP, her old one is to... .. . . .! girly.
Till the next chapter (of a light within the darkness or Code Moon)
RIM |
 Chigatana 9/16/07 . chapter 5good update...a nice riku/logan moment... |
 Fighter le Faye 9/16/07 . chapter 5Ooh, that ended very interestingly. And Kairi needed that talk (I hope she fights well in the future). Meh. Great update! |
 KuteIrishGrl 9/16/07 . chapter 5Hi again! lol nice chappie! so many questions to be answered! i wanna read more! lol! |