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RavenxRiku 3/25/12 . chapter 9
Please continue the story I was really gettin into it. :)
hopekills16 7/7/08 . chapter 9
it's good update soon please
Codescipio 1/11/08 . chapter 9
I prefer Pirates of the Carabian, Jack could get a keyblade!

Actualy me & my friends came up w/ a story were not gana publish we were gana use these worlds

Pirates 3

Star Wars Empire strikes back

Peter Pan

Naruto

Final Fantasy X-2

Final Fantasy XII

A person from each got a Keyblade

Jack

Luke

Peter Pan

Naruto & Sasuke

Yuna

Vaan

We also came up with & princesses of Battle instaed of Heart

Elizabeth Swan

Leia

Sakura

Ashe

Yuna

Kairi

Yuffie, Tifa, of Areith

If you like any of these ideas fell free to use them, though you probably wont, stll.
Codescipio 11/13/07 . chapter 8
That was good, wrighting out of order isn't bad...so long as you put it in order be4 posting it.

When are they going into the 1st world?
Codescipio 11/5/07 . chapter 7
2 words-code lyoko world. They could go on lyoko and well... ok I don't know.
Anonomous 10/27/07 . chapter 7
I understand now.

Even if its short its still good!

I'll be waiting for the next part! Keep Writing!
Fighter le Faye 10/26/07 . chapter 7
Now I sense tension. Lol, sorry. The suspense...(sighs). And watch your spelling there, only saw one word but people get REAL picky with that.
Codescipio 10/8/07 . chapter 6
Only one thing to say... .. . . .!

PLease dont take so long to update again.
Anonomous 10/8/07 . chapter 6
Amazing! this is going really well!

Opinion: I love how Kairi is wanting to fight, but your also making Riku and Sora sound really Sexist. Just a thought...

Great story! Keep writing!
Fighter le Faye 10/7/07 . chapter 6
Whoa, that was good!
Inyx Dawn 10/5/07 . chapter 5
Update soon!
Codescipio 9/20/07 . chapter 5
Wow the number of your reviers has a huge difference then in Code Moon but, it will go up.

I like the fact of Sora acting like a mother to Kairi being overly protective and all, it makes it funny.

I have 1 request... please give Kairi a new Keyblade ASAP, her old one is to... .. . . .! girly.

Till the next chapter (of a light within the darkness or Code Moon)

RIM
Chigatana 9/16/07 . chapter 5
good update...a nice riku/logan moment...
Fighter le Faye 9/16/07 . chapter 5
Ooh, that ended very interestingly. And Kairi needed that talk (I hope she fights well in the future). Meh. Great update!
KuteIrishGrl 9/16/07 . chapter 5
Hi again! lol nice chappie! so many questions to be answered! i wanna read more! lol!
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