I really liked your story. I thought it was well written.

you need to kill orpheus AND roxane!! kill both of them they're both jerks!

Oh no! Farid's having second thoughts! He'd never really give up on Dustfinger, though, right? He's kinda obsessed with him most of the time.

I know how you feel! Good luck with your surgery, tho! Nice story, too! you're a very good writer!

Surgery? Man, I don't blame you at all if you don't update... Although I would like it a lot if you did...

Note: The furry weasle-esque critter is "Marten". The dudes' name is Martin. Just to clear that up for ya.

GASP!
u put a cliffhanger? O.O ur goin DOWN!
-chases with torch and pitchfork-

great story i really love it ceep on trucking

Oog... It's all in bold... And you can't just stop in the midle of a sentace! Gah! You evil person, you!

I didn't think it was so bad, but then we all hate our own work:) You are taking your time in getting the plot moving, though. Not that it's really a bad thing, I mean, a lot of the time people rush their stories and it makes the exciting parts less exciting, if you catch my drift. Maybe I should just read the next chapter, huh?

Dude! I love Fruits Basket! Yippee!

Yay! I was wondering when Farid and Orpheus would show up. You're very good at making Cheeseface as annoying and obnoxious as he is, although I think he would be a bit less reluctant to help Farid. Orpheus is kinda obsessed with Dustfinger, just look at chapter one of Inkspell for multiple evidences. Also, you seem to have added an extra A into his name. (I think it's spelled Orpheus. I'm not absolutely sure, but it looks right. I'll have to look it up)

Seems pretty good, so far. I noticed you called Meggie "Megan" once in the beginning. I don't know if you did it on purpose, or if it's a typo, but I've always wondered if that was her real name. It seems like it, but no one ever mentions it in the books.