Well done!

really great story

Wow, that was fantastic! Hot, fun, romantic, and really believable.

oh, that was so great!

I rarely read anything but femslash, but this is really great. You did a great job, I hope there's a sequel

*sobs* OMG! That is so sad... The implication breaks my heart... No. I refuse to believe they didn't work this out. LOL They're meant to be. You NEED to write a sequel and fix this! LOL They have to be together.

this was an amazing story! bravo i say! bravo! it think the ending is fitting and it fits into the series... i don't think it's that much of an AU, it's an alternative beginning! you have phenomenal writing skills, especially for the hot chapters. whew! great job. can't wait to read more from you

I absolutely love this story and I read it in pure bliss!! ♥'s! Thank you, a joy to read!

-Erin

(How did I miss this chapter?) ...But I wanna know your take on so much now!. Like how she responds to working Bobby Goren, I mean...he's so different. How the letter is brought up (that's my main one). You know...that stuff...It can be seen in a different light now! But give me something...Nother story is cool too. I adore your writing, keep going!

Baah. I keep rereading this to see if perhaps a happy ending? But no...you had to be all artistic and beautiful and bittersweet and promises of things to come and shit. Meanie. This is so well done, and yet I want more. That's because you're just that good.

Excellent, as always. :-)

I knew it was coming, but I'm still saddened.

“Count your blessings, Goren,” she cut him off.
He grinned. And this was how they began to set boundaries.

Fabulous lines there. And this:

Bobby’s heart leapt with hope. Hope he knew Alex hadn’t intended. But that didn’t matter to him. He was a master at reading between the lines.

Also fabulous. Love at first sight indeed. *sighs*

Personally I like the ending. What a wonderful story.

This is a lovely story. Your beta has missed being a beta. I have to email you today. Hugs.

Wow. Um, yeah. Wow.

I think I know where this is going. LOL LOL LOL