*squees* I just read through all of your Zelda fanfiction in the past day or two and I am absolutely in love with all of it! I've never particularly cared for the Link/Dark Link pairing before, but it's grown on me. I love your portrayal of Dark as the counterpart to Link; if Link falls, Dark takes over and does what he couldn't. Update soon, please? I'd love to see how this plays out.

I swear vael is related to vatti or something! I hope I'm right.

So, I favorited this early this morning, but was waay to tired to leave a review, so I'll write one now :)

I love this story! There has not been one part were I thought anything was too boring, and I've been hooked on it from the very first chapter, I stayed up late last night to finish reading it. It is also very well written, which just adds to its awesomeness ;)

I would also like to tell you that I have read a couple of your other stories, and my favorite (out of all of them, and yes, including this one) has to be the 30 kisses challenge :) I'm just a sucker for the Dark Link/Link pairing _

Hmmm...I think that's all I can think of right now.. If I think of something else, I'll drop by and leave another review \(_)

Divinity

"I don't find out. "

it sound kind of weird...

gah seriously dammit Kafei! I totally agree with Dark, that guy need to freaking calm his stupid self down!

and that just serves him right from Vael and Byrne!

oh god that little eye ball thing is...kind of cute lol

I seriously have to laugh at how Dark converse with the little thing(Aifor), is just funny

oh oh, Aifor is such a cute one

awwww, really have to

and sigh...finally some rest...

hope tomorrow can be a good day...

Great, another update. Now I have to re-read everything...

Thank you for updating, I really love the story.

You really have me wondering now what they are going to do, with one Master sword broken and one missing. Though I hope they wont abondon Fi. And man, Link should really get pissed at the other heros. I mean, they made it sound like it would take no time at all last chapter, and now he became a dead weight to the others.

I hope you find the time to update soon again

Oh my god. You're such a good writer.

Even though this was a long chapter... I read it really quickly. Well it felt like that. This chapter just sucked me in and like, I was just so in to the story, I didn't realize how long it was. It felt like 2 seconds had went by...but in reality, it was actually way longer than that. xD

The end of the chapter... had me think about Vael, Dark, and Link having a ...threesome. o.o

LOL. Man, you shoulda heard me. I literally squeaked. And its like, quarter after 11. Hahaha, I have no idea how I'm going to get any sleep now. xD

I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I nearly died when I saw that you updated! I really, really, really love your story! Please keep up the good work!

if this was a game i would totaly play it. god your creativity is wonderful.

I am a new reader and love your story! The plot is amazing and I hope you update it soon.

I just reread your story for the third time since you first published it, and to my surprise and glee you had updated, and with one of the most exciting chapters yet! I adore this little love triangle you have going on; it seemed earlier that Link also had feelings for Vael but I didn't realize they were to that extent. Keen for the Skyward Sword references, especially in light of your combined focus on the Master Sword plot-wise, this should prove to be quite interesting. Your idea of reincarnated Links is kind of my head-canon now, heh. Looking forward to the next installment!

I don't know why, but I have to laugh at that last line

Ah...look at the time, I spent a whole day to read till this point, see how good with you and your story writing skill?

Exiting, good with bad together, one taste after another, long yet not boring, powerful description...

Yet some part where you change the view or timing kind of confuses me, not sure if you do that intentionally, but I can still understand just fine

If there's a rating system, I can assure you to get a good scoreu

but anyways, I must do my homework now... And I wish you the best with your life and this story.

" the more I learn, the less I know."

How things works, great thinker never say they understand or they know it, they merely stated that they do not know...

One question I must ask, which game or story is this traitor hero from? I really felt like you are not only getting ideas from the original games, but it just feels like there so much-to much information here all at once

I'm sorry for not commentting on the earlier chapter, I'm just not quite sure whether you would want to read all that commenting or not...

But anyways, I just feel so sad for Dark, going through all this, and all those pass Link maybe given him the same issue of changing into his older self

But oh! How I love your story, is confusing, yet is an exciting kind of confusing. I don't really know how to explain this, but this story is amazing! Is ok if you take your time, not only are we all busy with our normal life, by reading the story, one just can see how much brain Is needed for even one single chapter

But it all works out after all OuO(just like an Ordinary Miracle)

this is a really good story, i was wondering if i could draw some fanart?:P