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heartfallen
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseAmazing story and I loved the flashes
Witty-Kate
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseaww god that was really sad! you have a gift for making people cry lol, im not sure whether that is a good or bad thing at this point!

anyway that was reali good and hey it made sense to me lol
WickedNut
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseOh jeeze (that's my word for the week *grins*) I was practically crying at the end of this. I understood it...mostly, and it was so sad! But it's true! Poor Chris...
I loved it. it was an awesome story. I liked it a lot. I think you're a great writer, and I also like the rest of your stories!
Keep writing!
Jenna
Totally-Out-Of-It
2007-12-04
ch 1,
abuseWhoo!

u said review but i didnt know what to say so.. so 'whoo!' and i liked it.
Fhulhi the Crazy
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abusePerfect. There really isn't any other way to describe it. I loved this fic!
Melinda Wyatt Charmed
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseAw.. Love it! Another great writing piece of yours - I really love it! Poor Chris (as always :P) I have to admit I was confused a bit between the scenes but when I focused they became clear, lol! And I had to take a break coz I would cry and I couldn't coz I am in a public place :p see wot u did now? No, no! It's not bad! Keep doing it :p Well done!
Stoneage Woman
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseA beautiful, heartbreaking peice. I loved it.
forestwife
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuse“Who are you?” a rough voice demanded of him, hazel eyes narrowed suspiciously at the newcomer whose clothes were in tatters. Though worn, his eyes held a determined look, one that left no room for pity.
“I can help you.”

“Help us what?” called another – a sneer. Who could possibly help them? They needed more than this fallen angel; they needed a miracle straight from the lips of God himself. This angel couldn’t provide what no one else could.

“I can help you kill my brother.”

I especially liked this bit... brilliant. Need I say more?
neb92
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseYou did a pretty good job, so don't worry about it. The flashes were sort of confusing, but once I understood what you were doing, I got it.

Well, I'm going to re-read through my rewrite of the first chapter of Adopted, and hopefully I should post it today, maybe tomorrow.

Well, talk to you later!

Neb
katawat
2007-08-29
ch 1, anon.
abusewow! that was so sad, but I still loved it!
k.
Camilinha
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseOMG!!You do like to write about Chris suffering...lol... Although it did probably happen to him, so... its not a lie...
Anyway, the fic Dark Destiny already has chapters? Because when I checked it didnt.. oh well, I'll go there later..
Bises Ca
angelkat2502
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abusegreat oneshot :) well written :D
History Buff 1990
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseNow this was cool, and don't worry about the senselessness (weird word that is) stuff, if anything, senseless is my middle name, or it would be if I had one, lol.

As you lknow I'm a huge Chris/Bianca fan, so I especially loved this, and you know what really bothers me?

In the character list thingies on here they have characters like Gideon listed, and a couple of others who only appeared in like one episode, but there's no section for Bianca in there. How wrong is that?

Anyway, rant over, as always I loved this thing as much as I love most of your work, and I can't wait to read more from you, so, well I suppose you know what to do, lol.

Enjoy the rest of your summer, bye.
guardian music angel
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abusecool!nuff said.
pinkphoenix1985
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abusegood part!
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