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| heartfallen 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abuseAmazing story and I loved the flashes |
| Witty-Kate 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseaww god that was really sad! you have a gift for making people cry lol, im not sure whether that is a good or bad thing at this point! anyway that was reali good and hey it made sense to me lol |
| WickedNut 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOh jeeze (that's my word for the week *grins*) I was practically crying at the end of this. I understood it...mostly, and it was so sad! But it's true! Poor Chris... I loved it. it was an awesome story. I liked it a lot. I think you're a great writer, and I also like the rest of your stories! Keep writing! Jenna |
| Totally-Out-Of-It 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWhoo! u said review but i didnt know what to say so.. so 'whoo!' and i liked it. |
| Fhulhi the Crazy 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abusePerfect. There really isn't any other way to describe it. I loved this fic! |
| Melinda Wyatt Charmed 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseAw.. Love it! Another great writing piece of yours - I really love it! Poor Chris (as always :P) I have to admit I was confused a bit between the scenes but when I focused they became clear, lol! And I had to take a break coz I would cry and I couldn't coz I am in a public place :p see wot u did now? No, no! It's not bad! Keep doing it :p Well done! |
| Stoneage Woman 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseA beautiful, heartbreaking peice. I loved it. |
| forestwife 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuse“Who are you?” a rough voice demanded of him, hazel eyes narrowed suspiciously at the newcomer whose clothes were in tatters. Though worn, his eyes held a determined look, one that left no room for pity. “I can help you.” “Help us what?” called another – a sneer. Who could possibly help them? They needed more than this fallen angel; they needed a miracle straight from the lips of God himself. This angel couldn’t provide what no one else could. “I can help you kill my brother.” I especially liked this bit... brilliant. Need I say more? |
| neb92 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseYou did a pretty good job, so don't worry about it. The flashes were sort of confusing, but once I understood what you were doing, I got it. Well, I'm going to re-read through my rewrite of the first chapter of Adopted, and hopefully I should post it today, maybe tomorrow. Well, talk to you later! Neb |
| katawat 2007-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abusewow! that was so sad, but I still loved it! k. |
| Camilinha 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseOMG!!You do like to write about Chris suffering...lol... Although it did probably happen to him, so... its not a lie... Anyway, the fic Dark Destiny already has chapters? Because when I checked it didnt.. oh well, I'll go there later.. Bises Ca |
| angelkat2502 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abusegreat oneshot :) well written :D |
| History Buff 1990 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseNow this was cool, and don't worry about the senselessness (weird word that is) stuff, if anything, senseless is my middle name, or it would be if I had one, lol. As you lknow I'm a huge Chris/Bianca fan, so I especially loved this, and you know what really bothers me? In the character list thingies on here they have characters like Gideon listed, and a couple of others who only appeared in like one episode, but there's no section for Bianca in there. How wrong is that? Anyway, rant over, as always I loved this thing as much as I love most of your work, and I can't wait to read more from you, so, well I suppose you know what to do, lol. Enjoy the rest of your summer, bye. |
| guardian music angel 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusecool!nuff said. |
| pinkphoenix1985 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusegood part! |