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Lynn Acissej
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
Plese post the next chapter soon. I want to see what happens between them so bad. Please don't tell me you quit this story it was so good, and I haven't truthfully seen anything too like this before. I would really love it if you would post the next chapter. Thanks for posting the first one. ^_^
sammeh
2008-05-12 . chapter 1
(i'm a girl) it's very good ^^
WHEE.
2008-03-14 . chapter 1
OH! The drama! I'm still a bit confused though. But, that's why you need to update, plz?
Kimikimer
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
OMGOOMGOGMOGMOGMGOMG PLEASE UPDATE!
Vampire Muffins
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
omg
update.
you just have too.
I LOVE all ur stories.
Ur a really good writer!
SO UPDATE!
luff <3
2007-09-19 . chapter 1
i love the overall plot! hope to read more
GASP.
2007-09-19 . chapter 1
Poor Tenten. and Neji too! What is this? A cliffy fic? If so, I can't wait to read more!
Pizzypop
2007-09-19 . chapter 1
You boost xD! You better continue this! Loved it.
Cheerios Freak
2007-09-16 . chapter 1
It was great! *Nice guy pose* Hope you'll update soon. It doesn't lack of anything! Keep on the good work!
See you!
:;:Cheerios Freak:;:
runjumpfly07
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
update soon.
chaosdragon82
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
I liked it. The super popular Neji and his best friend who is tired of seeing all the females fawn over him. The two of them being together touching, kissing. Maybe she sees it as a lie because they are supposed to be best friends but they're together alone kissing like lovers. Perhaps she feels angry because she feels like he brought her out there just to makeout. Perhaps she is angry because he claims her as his girl when they are in private but not in public. Perhaps she is angry because if everyone knew maybe she wouldn't have to deal with all the girls throwing themselves at her. Maybe it makes her mad, jealous, and makes her feel a little down because she thinks that he thinks she is good enough to be his girlfriend in secret but not in public. Let me know if I'm way off. Update SOON PLEASE!
Templar415
2007-08-30 . chapter 1
it was good.. right ammount of drama and angst... just too much.. o whats the word im looking for.. o thats right CONFUSION! WTF IS GOING ON!? jeeze... clear it up or something... the last part i can understand whats going on but it doesnt mean its not confusing... i think it might be the lack of emotions... heh..
so just to clarify, they just use each other physically in that sense and have no feelings like that for each other? "yet"?
B.Q.
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
oh! me like! UPDATE please!!
Powerful-phoenix
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
great story! keep going
HimeHeenim
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
I loved this.Angst is definitely there :D

Please update soon!
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