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| Kdala 2008-01-07 ch 30, | abuseI read this story some weeks ago and completely forgot to review though i had the text already in my mind ;) so now it want's to be written down. I have to confess, i didn't like your story *that* much, just because i'm absolutely not a established relationship-fan. But even after i realised that it would be like that from the 3rd (?) chapter on, i couldn't stop myself from going on reading! Just had to tell you, that your writing was really really good, and even though i didn't like the topic, i enjoyed reading it! And it only took my around 3 days to read through the whole story, read in every free minute, and i hadn't really had a lot of time ;) |
| Sandpiper 2007-12-25 ch 8, | abuseOkay, Reid was sweet for going with JJ to her appointment and, the proposal, while probably a bad idea, did have very sweet intentions behind it. However, I'm sorry but Reid was just completely WRONG for getting mad at JJ for wanting to have an abortion. He wasn't the one who was raped, he isn't the one who's carrying the child, and it isn't his baby. Of all the times to put your own personal beliefs aside and let it just be the choice of the victim, this is at the top of the list! |
| MeadowLark4491 2007-10-29 ch 30, | abuseThat was fantastic. |
| AlisaJT 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abusei just read the entire story, for some reason my browser wouldnt show me chapter 15, it was killing me! all is now well though, such a good story, you're really fantastic at the whole cliffhanger thing absolutely loved it, look forward to reading more from you :) |
| TutorGirlml 2007-10-04 ch 28, | abuseAnother great chapter! I don't know how you do it, you update all the time and yet your chapters are always so enjoyable and just plain good! I love the funny scenes with Jack and Reid and the rest of the team at the party. And I thought you did a really good job with their fight. Not that I want them to fight, but realistically Reid would have to be feeling a bit of resentment by this point, and he'd have to let it out. Great job, I've got the last two chapters to read right now. :) |
| TutorGirlml 2007-10-02 ch 27, | abuseHey! Sorry I've gotten so far behind on this story. I'm really loving it and I miss it when I don't check to check for an update. I especially liked this chapter, what with the whole team getting together to try to cheer JJ up, Jack's cuteness, and Haley being so perceptive and understanding. I would think she would have to be, to be married to Hotch. I would imagine he would bring a lot of stress and worry and pressure home, and she would have to learn to know when something was bothering him and how to help. I thought that was a very nice scene when she read Reid's feelings so well and let him know that it was okay. Nice work! |
| LadyWriter29 2007-10-02 ch 30, | abuseWOW! That was awesome! I loved that. It was WONDERFUL. You did a real good job. I hope you write another story, if you haven't already. Thanks for sharing that wonderful work of art. Let me know if you have another story like this one. |
| lee 2007-09-29 ch 30, anon. | abuseOkay it was great. But...I think at the very end JJ should have said something like, "Oh and by the way genius, my science experiment DID work.." lol |
| tearbos 2007-09-29 ch 30, | abuseAww so bittersweet. It's a great ending, but I'm sad it's over. I'm so glad they finally worked out their issues. Now they can grow as a couple. I'd love to see the rest of the team with the baby. I bet it would be hysterical. Great job, great story, just great. |
| PlatypusTVlover 2007-09-29 ch 30, | abuseWow, what a great ending! I'm thrilled that they worked it out and got Hope, which is a beautiful name. I have really enjoyed this story, and you did an amazing job. Thank you for sharing! |
| Murgy31 2007-09-28 ch 30, | abuseGreat Ending! This story had me hooked! |
| REIDFANATIC 2007-09-28 ch 30, | abuseWhat a wonderful ending. Hope, what a wonderful name for their little angel. Hope is just what they need! |
| Mellow girl 2007-09-28 ch 30, | abuseGreat Chapter! What a great end to such a great emotional story! |
| Aelia O'Hession 2007-09-28 ch 30, | abuseAw! Baby! This makes me all warm and fuzzy. A new baby cousin just came to the family the other day, so this is doubly warm and fuzzy for me. I find this to be a fabulous ending to this entire story. There past few chapter have been heavy with angst, but everythings startng to come together quite wonderfully. Is there any hope of a mini sequel that shows how the team reacts to the new baby? Congrats on a wonderful story! I've enjoyed the ride. |
| CrImInAlMiNdScSiNyFaN87 2007-09-28 ch 30, | abuseYou are the BEST! I LOVED this last chapter and I will admit I did cry during it and I am sad to know its over. I hope you have more JJ/Reid stories brewing in your mind because you are a great writer and I can't wait to read another story you come up with. |