once agin well done and i can not wait for the next update!

Wow. These chapters are short, but intense. Definitely can't wait to read the next one!

What! Ryan AND Seph! I don't even know how this story could go without either of them, let alone both of them, but I'm sure you've got a great idea for it. Poor Rikku and Rae...

I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Guess I should start with the next chapter...


(PS, I read your first book and the first few chapters of the second a long time ago, and when I saw you had updated this one I figured I should go finish Return of the Gods... it was so good! A few loose ends maybe, but they'll probably get tied up in this book, no?)

Wow, you're not dead or retired! And I've got update notices from two other stories I thought were dead.

wow, Auron and Lusniec working together so well and efficiently; never thought i'd live to see the day. they kinda remind me of Mystra's Chosen now, as well as Dumbledore XD

i cringe to think of what Matt would have done if Sakura had died there... and you better do something for Seph, he was too damn awesome to just have die like that and not give him at least some kind or funeral or something T.T

wow, i can't believe i never reviewed this chapter *smacks forehead* oh well, i'm doing it now.

and the mysteries just keep getting piled on. my favorite part was definitely the exchange between Matt, Andy, and Lusniec. and i'll admit, i like Lusniec's character much more in this book; reminds me of Dumbledore actually... also, i have much more interest in finding out the history between Demon Edge and Lusniec. intelligent weapons are supposed to be extremely rare after all *checks DMG real quick*

Awesome chapter, I'm glad there were no deaths. That Lulu death scare just now was bad enough.

But seriously, I thought you abandoned this story! You've got to write more, you're only on chapter three! I forgot quite a bit about this story but I was able to refresh my memory quickly. I just forgot who JT and Melody are. And Brooke is the group White Mage, right...?

And is Tidus around?

Those demons are pretty powerful, but they dont seem quite unstoppable. Anyway, I'm glad Wakka and Lulu are joining the fray. Most fics have them settled down by now, lol.

My review would be longer, but I have to go now, sorry. Great chapter, and I eagerly await a possible review reply and a new chapter =D

o.o it was good my dear, I just feel it was slightly rushed. Somethings happened so fast. One minute your like whoamuh god fight, the next its like Kitty is here o.o; -shrugs- xD

but other than that

Your stories are awesome! In fact, it's thanks to reading your stories that I got the courage to start my own!

I'm a little annoyed that you killed off the two coolest characters in your story, but I bet they aren't really dead.

And, yay, Kitty's back! I'm a major Neko-girl fan, just ask my friends...

*long sigh* you killed ryan. *cries* the only good thing is that it leaves Rikku available. Still though, I doubt the "main" character of the last two stories seriously went out like that without even a fight. And Seph dead? unimaginable. I refuse to believe you. :P Thanks for updating with the story, and again, my only encouragement is to be sure you look back and follow on the plot points you left us hanging with at the end of return of the gods. Glad to see you here again. :)

first thought/s after reading this involved the words oh, good and gawd ^_^

well, hows that for not breaking people in lightly? ^_^

good chapter, could I expect chapter 2 before 2008?

Wow, two powerful entities are dead...! No! XO
Damn those, those... mysterious beings for this! DX
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Urgh... man, everything's going into chaos, and it's only just chapter 2 of the fic.

(a VERY large vein pops out on forehead)

You've...had this...typed out...FOR A WHILE!?!?

(throws the broad side of a barn at you)

Dodge that! And this one too!

(throws another one, this one made entirely out of iron, with spikes, covered in tobasco)

Anyways, with the non-crescendo-esque departures of two of this trilogy's favorite characters, I can't help but feel this will NOT be the last we'll see of them.

Good chapter- it cleared up SOME things. I wonder who is killing them! They've got to be really strong to take down both of them. So why is Andy a full-fledged god and Matt and Ryan aren't? That's odd. Anyways, who is Rea? You said in this chapter that she was with Seph...? Is that the Fiend Summoner girl? I don't remember her name >.>

Umm... what else... oh, are lulu and wakka going to have a decent-sized part in this? Who else has children? Will that little baby Elaine (Sakura and Matt's kid, right?) get in the way of things or stop Sakura from fighting? Anyways, I liked this chapter. Hopefully they can get Ryan or Seph back somehow ^^ Andd I remember Kitty! She was cool. And who's that Damien guy? He said to Matt.. ."Ryan, while I'm sure he was powerful, shouldn't have been so strong as to be able to challenge US." How strong IS Damien?? ANyways, cant wait for the next update!

Man~! It's been a long time since I reviewed, huh? Sorry about that. I was rereading "2 Fallen Gods and a Guardian Angel" and "Return of the Gods." ^^; NOW, you've posted another story which is the continuation of the other ones.
Oh GOD! It's like you have the greatest resilience and patience to keep on with these works! O_o?!

Anyway, this story proves to be stranger than the others, since now, we got another group of oddities hell bent on killing Ryan for some reason. Also, what's with the bit about Ryan's hair turning silver?! And this happened when he displayed that strange power after just drinking an Elixer! It's like something extremely wicked is gonna happen to him... but he upped and disappeared like that! I'M GETTING CONFUSED! DX
Another bit that has got me confused is HOW did Auron suddenly COME BACK?! O_o;;

I wish to be enlightened soon... so please post the next chapter in the near future, 'kay? ALSO, GREAT JOB WITH FINISHING "RETURN OF THE GODS" AND STARTING THIS NEW STORY! CONGRATULATIONS! ^_^