That was absolutely tantalizing. Wonderful look into Kaiba's mind.
And, erm, when's the second part coming out? ;D

-blinks- I saw that you were one of the well-known authors on WikiFic, and this story is mentioned there, too - and all I have to say is that this was a hell of a good one-shot. It carried them just about perfectly. Good going, Miso!

Oi, XD where's the next part? Lawl.

I like how you characterized both of them. XD

TT__TT it was adorible! its just what i need for my puppyshipping cruve cause *cough* some people haven't updated in a while.*cough* anyway love it! >_

Wow, short but good. I really like the sort-of-lemon, it was not too descriptive, yet hot! For your first try, it's awsome! *thumb ups* (Encore, encore! xD *pervert*)

I like the way that Kaiba can't pretend with Jounouchi, and prefer to act! (Jou doesn't mind at al xD)

I'm longing for part two! Good luck~ =D

*applauds your first attempt at a lemon* Very good! I've never attempted a lemon myself *blushes furiously*, but yours was short and sweet.
It's kind of sad, that whole 'tell me you love me, even if you don't mean it' thing. But I suppose if you're getting into a relationship with Seto Kaiba, you need to get used to those kinds of things.
The raw passion -for lack of a better phrase- was good! Awaiting the next installment ^_^
-iloveatem