Love your detail! awesome work!

All I can say is awesome descriptions.

I'm so glad you had that time line in the begining. I too have only learned about the Trinity Blood world from the anime and the story of the Crusniks has always fashinated me. Its nice to have actually found it. Why didn't I think of Wiki? Oh well, its nice to see you did research for your story. It provides a firm foundation which every good story needs. And your characters are very thought out. *sigh* I'm jealous. I write fanfiction becuase of my lack of ability to come up with charming characters. So yes, wonderful story. Maybe I can learn a little from reading it about charater developments.