that was so sweet
pretty Itachi

Lovely. Simply lovely.

This was so cute! I loved their interection, it was funny and natural, and somewhat sexy :D You did the best portrait of Kisame I have ever read. Man I just love him in your story:)

And Itachi gave Kisame permition to be the one who will take his innocence when he is ready. Lovely :)

You write ‘necessaire’ instead of 'wash bag' or whatever these English-speaking people say :D I dont' know, it just made you story seem more familiar to me (because I, as a European, also say 'necessaire')

kawaii *-*

DUDE
when i saw this story when i was surfing on here
i became obsessed with it
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT
and i love your sequel to it too
AMAZING
you're really good

favs

Thank you so much...that was jsut what I needed right now...thanks so much for posting ^_^ Innocent little Itachi is so cute -huggles-

"one of those dirty homeless children you sometimes found outside ghost villages." Great line. Instantly made me think of Orochimaru. That pervert's always picking up destitute children.
Itachi is a convenient size for the sink. Much more manageble than some of Kisame's past partners, I'm sure.
“I’m glad you’re enjoying yourself at my expense, love.”-Love it!
In my opinion, the two most important things that ninja villages seem to lack are orphanages for children of fallen ninjas and sex ed classes. I really appreciate that you respected the fact that Itachi is 13. Sex is nice. Underage sex is not a good idea.

Oh yes

Wow...that was so cool...you did a good job! Heh...love the last line...“The drain was too narrow, he didn’t fit.” LOL! Awesome!

Peace Out! ^_^

haha, loved it!! write more please! the ending was soo funny! lol
:3

good chapter i'll read the seaqul. =]

Aw! It's sweet! In a pedophile-y way! But sweet nonetheless! ^^

I like this, i'm wait to see what you come up with. =)
By the way thanks for adding!

squee! awesome! i like the young, innocent itachi! he's friggin ADORABLE, yeah! way different from the itachi in 'just because' ^_^ muchly praise to you! sequels are always good, yeah!