Yeah,(I blink) a little weird, but it is a good Spova one shot.

It's not a bad plot, but u could have gone a bit deeper with it, and you had some grammar issues. I alo think it may be good to find another way to show changing povs.

Oh GOD that's funny!I love the couple sparx and noba.I just do.

lets see u r adding "s" where ur not suppose 2. horrible grammar n good story.maybe u shuld chek ur grammar like i have 2 chek my spelling.

Aww, sweet! IT's good, really. I'm listening to "Happy Together" by Simple Plan, so it fitted well. ;D

Cool, its really a good spova oneshot.

Nice job. Sweet.

I liked it!

it is very sweet,
i like it,
and...

have you ever had a moment where you forget every thing you were going to say in a review. Am i the only one??

any why i like the story.

love
dream