 Veraliana 5/5/08 . chapter 1I know what line you're talking about, tee hee. Personally, I was more excited about Snow Mountain Syndrome. You should know which part I'm referring to XD Anyway, that was cute. Nicely done. |
 JuicyPuffin 12/29/07 . chapter 1Aww. Well, I wanted to write something for the crosswalk scene... I feel left out in some ways 'cause I have no access to a a bookstore and so I can't read the series, but only watch the anime.
But yeah, Itsuki! |
 Kenzie493 10/5/07 . chapter 1I like it! Especially the last line. Good job. |
 YukinaKisaYanaseLVR 9/25/07 . chapter 1good, but a bit confusing. |
 SquishyNinaChan 8/30/07 . chapter 1that was pretty good...a little confusing...but still good... |