Pretty interesting. However, I have one issue to address. Namely, why the story has been flagged as complete. Because frankly, it seems incomplete to me, and has seemingly been that way for what, 7 years or so? It would be appreciated if a notice was put up with an explanation as to why a story remains unfinished, instead of leaving people hanging.

This is a truly great story! One of your best and you really ought to continue it.

Very enjoyable story. Yet... Somehow it seems incomplete. Please continue. Thank you.

Looking forward to seeing how you take this.

Really nice story. Looking forward to seeing what else you have for me to read.

Sounds like Nabiki needs to see a good mage...I do hope that she can recover from whatever spells that bastard Gothwrain put on her.

Keep the chapters coming!

Gee, I thought this was familiar, though I wasn’t sure until the trap in chapter 3. I’m now pretty sure I have read this before. Though, oddly, it seems like I can only remember bits and pieces. The flow is different from what I remember. Either I read this years ago (not likely), it’s a rewrite (less likely), or just an increadably similar story (least likely). Well, on to reviewing, it’s a good piece. I actually enjoyed it, even knowing what comes next (more or less). I’m a little peeved that it’s not finished, but it’s my fault for not checking first (a common problem with me, I forgot to set the search parameters). It is a very interesting piece, though I am a little bit disappointed in the lack of follow-through (I am not referring to the unfinished part, rather, there was no further discussion of the amazons). I did appreciate this piece’s easy to follow story, and, interesting, blend of elements. You seemed to get most of the characters right, though you did fall into several stereotypes (see trimaters "in the lunchroom" for examples). My biggest complaint would have to be leaving it unfinished, and my biggest praise would probably be, okay, it’s a tie between the long chapters (a big plus in my book), and the general "flow" of the story. Should this peace ever be completed, I would surely recommend it to my friends. Ciao

Good history! I kind of curious how have been doing Ryouga all this time. I mean, the surroundings sounds dangerous, he is a werewolf and has not his backpack, umbrella or any clothes for the matter.

I really hope that you'll continue this history, please update soon

Good story.
Please update soon.

great story as usual please update when you can. I really like this plot.

Akane was She Who Shooed Away Cats.
LOL. I like that!

Great story. It's a shame it's abandoned.

She was beginning to learn why so many people
felt obliged to blame everything on Ranma. It was
very cathartic. Great line.

Good chapter.

Talking to parents sometimes resulted in new fiancées. *grin* I can see where Ranma would
get that impression.

Ranko is adapting way too easily to being female.
She has all of Ranma's memories and personality
so she should be behaving as Ranma would if his
curse got locked.

"This is what they mean by karma," Nabiki said. "Isn't it?" *grin* The way you portray
Nabiki it fits!

You're going to make this look like an accident.
LOL.
I love that line.


*chuckle*
Ranma stop attacking Ranma.
I like it.

"Mousse!" Shampoo shouted. "FALL ON HEAD!"

"I need to stop walking through glowing doorways," Ryouga said wearily

LOL. Great chapter.

more please

and soon?