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EmptySpaces11 2008-04-16 ch 6,	abuseI am waiting for the next.
EmptySpaces11 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseI am reading and really loved it.
Chloe Winchester 2008-03-05 ch 6,	abuseWow that was intense. I mean aLOT of hurt. I liked it though...does that make me psycho? may-b IDK. I really did like it though.
TCB 0.5 2007-11-14 ch 6,	abuseWhat an intense story and well written! I'm so glad, Sammy found poor Dean finally; and when he did, it broke my heart as much as in the chapers before that. Yet truth be told, I was repelled by your level of violence and almost didn't read throught to the end.
brighette 2007-10-06 ch 6,	abuseBrig, always playing catch up...but wrapped this one up! Man, I don't see how he survived, though I understand how the others didn't ;) Poor, poor Dean! I think between Sam and Laura, though, he'll manage to make it out ok...off to read the first bit of Twilight, I'm assuming it picks up where this left off!
SamDeanLover28 2007-09-21 ch 6,	abuseexcellent excellent excellent story ready and waiting for next installment
historylover 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseThanks for the Laura-warning. Still, I stuck with it. And, it's a good one! Kat
LovinJackson 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseHey there :) I am ever so relieved that Sam has found Dean and Nana told me about Laura although i was suprised to see her and i dont know why? guess i have to get accustomed to her coz it sounds like the shit has really hit the fan ... they are in trouble hehe which makes for a great story lol :P Great job :) Tara x0x
CatBeist 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseOk I have to tell you before I get to your EPI... 1) Is that it is an awesome chapter when you have no idea how far down you are with the scrolling and don't care cus the story kick ass! (but we knew that) 2) Think it is one of the best stories out there though sad that it is ending, then get overlyhappy when it has been noticed that there IS an epiloge! OK... now let's get to the EPI before the rant! WELCOME THE RANT: WOW... and... dang woman... wow... You have me so caught up in this story I feel like I am right there with them... and that is no joke and slightly scary. Also when I get the need to turn of the tv and have it completely silent just to read you know I REALLY RE-HEALLY are putting my heart and soul into this story, and only cus that is the least of what you deserve! Cus... WOW! Man... Wow... speechless I am... Also, once again I do love Laure in your stories. You have her well written and she goes so well with both boys and if Kripke doesn't manage to get his chicks in this show fairly decent I am sending him a book with your stuff and marking down everything you got with Laura in it and telling him "THIS IS HOW YOU WANT IT DONE" and I can add your phone nr too :) Seriously though, and I think I said this from the get-go of Laura, or at least years back (or one year... or months... whatever) that I REALLY do like her, and as you say she never INTERFERE with the boys, she never hinder the point of the story nor does HER story get in the way of the SHOW we want to see (also see I am referring to THIS as the SHOW... I just noticed that...). Also... I am really really really glad that you ended it where you did. I mean sure Dean is not 100% but he WILL be fine unless you cone up with a oneshot and have him fall down the stairs and crack open his head (only reason I am saying that is cus I have this weirdest song in my head about a Man named Arne that goes out but he falls down the stairs and dies, and one day I should translate that hole song so you guys can see cus it is funny as hell though you'd probably not get it... well you would, but not the others I think... maybe... dunno... I am ranting... shutting off! OK... where were we. Oh Epi too... well inn all honesty I find it very interesting though I don't think I get it all if I am supposed to get anything at all unless you are throwing out a teaser for your war and just doing as Kripke making up more questions to pain our minds, though that is in fact half the fun. All in all I think this story is one of my favourites... and I do think I am getting a few of them, and also I feel kinda weird saying it cus they ALL do stick together and they are all so insanely talented written, and Woodsy was right... that we get to read this stuff of yours for free is awesome, though I am not sure we deserve it :) Though I KNOW you are glad we do so not gonnah argue that with you and when you sell whatever you sell first script, book whatever... I will be the first in line to get it, and when you have 10.0 books out there I will have a shelf dedicated to you from book nr 1 till book br 9.9 (tchihi cus the last one I will be reading at the time... HAH) And I know I haven't said it in a long time though I KNOW you deffo know what I think about it. YOU DESERVE to be out there, you DESERVE to show your stuff cus it is THAT good if not SO much better and I as well as YOU KNOW it will happen and I am just so friggin psyched by that! WOW... long... but then again... WOW seems to be the describing word! Love to you lady! Now get working on your REAL REAL stuff!
Tacpebs 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuse>.>
River City1 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseGreat story! I can see that I need to go back and read your previous stories to find out about Laura. The next story looks very promising.
rozzy07 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseSifi, A most unexpected finish, so open ended that truly it left me gobsmacked! You left me with questions stacked up on further questions, and yes now I amdesperate for the follow up! Evil girl I tell you, pure evil, but I love you for it cos it keeps my grey matter ticking over in anticipation! You know that I also adore your Laura. Her complete love for Dean, for Sam is unequalled and her turning at the end of this theatre of major Dean angst should have been anticipated but truly it came as a most welcome surprise to me. Sam also came into his own here, offering up of himself, giving up something to Dean that only a brother's love could ever do. That perhaps only Sam can do now. So you ended this feast of visual battery, of blood clots and ripped tissue, with the suggestion this was all but a test. For Dean? For Sam? For all that makes these boys such a unique force in your beautifully written universe? All I can say it is always so intensely satisfying to read one of your works before starting the slow frustrating wait for the next. Great freaking story telling here girl so please hurry and feed more soon in form you wish to vist on me soon... please! Rozzy.
NathMG 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseThat was just, WOW! I'm like, WOW! I couldn't believe this was the end. Dean's not even awake yet. I'm so glad your doing a sequel. I'm on board for that. Obviously I need to go back and read your other fics because I have no idea who Laura is, but I like her already. Beautiful angst and love depicted in this chapter. And much gore and blood... That was just gross! I so love hurt Dean. Evil bad girl is totally creepy. Can't wait for more. Awesome story! You're on my list of authors to look out for. Hope you post your next story soon:D
sunnyjunedays 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseHi, You know i'm quite sad to see this story go, but really pleased there's gonna be another. Loved the way this chapter went and to have the epilogue straight after was good too. You are quite the genius, i loved this story from beginning to end. See you on the next story. x
Nvrmore 2007-09-19 ch 6,	abuseAw. Hero. Pshaw. (picture blushing smiley here) M. Love the comment about the car's spirit. She was there before the fire, she was there while Sammy was gone at college. Much truth in that statement. Loved that your brought Hendrickson in the mix. And... my goodness woman you're a genius. Hee hee. (blushing again) I didn't make the connection either (that they'd know he needs to be in a hospital). :D I like when you talk about the effects of the cone on Laura and the hints at some of her activities while away from the boys. Pretty cool in keeping her an independent character (that her life continues/exists out of the boys presence). Creepy little girls and their creepy little ways. Hmm. and Good! I'm glad she's blind to them. It's nice to see a not all-powerful bad guy and the light doing something to protect its own. Thanks for that. Well, I didn't comment much on the middle because I was too enthralled to take a break. :D But the whole thing was wonderfully done. And YEA! You already have a title for the next story! Awesome! I look forward to that starting. Wonderful, a-wonderful. K. Must get back to my real life now. :D Thanks for the diversion.

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