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| Val-Creative 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseOh very lovely and detailed writing. I adore stories that can keep my attention with elaborate language. Plus, Ryuya and Kanna are a sweet idea to dwell on. ^^ And I am curious to know what the last three sentences are translated to. This is fantastic, and definitely needs more reviews! ~ Val |