 Kuro Ame 2007-08-29 . chapter 1Aw, I liked this. :3 Short, but sweet. It's well-written, and I loved the last line, although 'twas sad! The voices from the planet were also very believable, if that makes sense. CloudxAerith forever! xD The one teensy thing I have to pick out is that Aerith didn't actually know she was gonna die... She didn't sacrifice herself for the planet.
Or did you know that already? Either way, it made a lovely read. :D |