(tries not laugh hystariclly at the pick up line)
again, a masterpiece. loved it, from begining to end, just like jess not to show how vulnerable he is but still make you feel emotionly shaken after he says something. and -grins- rory lied about books...

Wow. This is blew me away. Is really one of the best one-shots I’ve read lately, even though I hate Rory’s attitude I think this is great
Once again, great job, I love how you write =)

I like it alot!

i just love you, seriusly
you give me my loved literati fix
you have won your place in heaven!@
well done!

Amazing as usual.

so good! update! and while your at it update sex or love that is my fav story

I thought Logan’s line was quite romantic at first but then I realised what you meant. Also I began reading under the impression that the first guy was Jess. I’m sorry but when it comes to things I think Jess said, I pathetically oblige that he can do no wrong. Besides JUST before I had just randomly discovered one of Milo’s old movies. I think I should be forgiven, I was on a Milo high.

I realised that there is serious lack of closure between Rory and Jess. I swear sometimes Romeo and Juliet’s misfortune has nothing on these two!

To continue or not to continue, that is the question?

PS Thanks for the reference to the poem. I’m an avid poetry reader.

Okay, so this was amazing. Although I don't expect anything else from you! ;-)
But I have to say that it was not you best work, but as always you've captured the spirit of literati.

LOL, when I saw you had updated I rushed to FF and hoped that it was "Sex or Love" you had updated.
Anyidea when that is going to be up?! :-)
Dying for an update!

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Wow. I love that sonnet. I want to marry it and have its babies. It was a great choice for the story.

I have to say, this is not your best work. I'm not too fond of Logan in this, even though he's far from being at the top of my favorite characters. Some of it feels a little choppy and rushed, but the majority of it was pure greatness.
I really love the way you write Rory and Jess- blunt, honest, exactly in-character for their relationship. Even when you write something so totally AU like 'Sex or Love' you manage to capture the essence that is Literai, a talent many (including myself) would like to possess.
I like how Rory reacts to the harsh reality of the situation she's in, and your Jess was a perfect blend of sarcasm and fragility- that of his love for Rory.
"Maybe I lied too." Gravy, I love it.

I can't wait for more from you, whether it's another little oneshot or an update to another story.

-Mariah :D

cute!

SO Good! Continue please! And I am still waiting for Sex or Love because that one is hot!

Aw! That was so cute!

..that was fantastic, beautiful, and perfect! i loved it so much. When I read this part "He looks at this girl who once had his heart and now has nothing at all." I was like, oh no he doesn't like her anymore!! But the end was so perfect I loved how you compared Rory love for books to Jess's love for Rory. Such an original idea! Thank you =D I can't wait to read more from you soon!!

I absolutely love you!
This was one amazing story, and it's definitely one of my favorites.

perfection
:)

Aww perfect, i loved this i really did...i always love stories where jess doesn't just take rory in his arms and all is forgiven...this is real...can't for you to update your stories :)