Sorry about Corisu's review. He broke my backspace button.
Anyway, can you please update?!

Great job! Keep up the good work.

Corisu: Good story. I hope your not one those people asking for an amount of reviews just so you could update. SPREAD THE WORD!!

Damnit, can't delete this. Any way please update.

NO Ry, forget Yami. Malik is soo much better!! LOL

Oh whatever. Baku will kill him you know. He'd probably allow for Malik. Unless Malik is to meet Marik or Bakura soon?

I thought though that Marik is looking at Bakura?? Grins*

I can't blame him. LOL

I love this story. ^^ I can't believe I didn't read it before. Anyways, awesome job with the characters, just be sure to spell check!

It's great, and I understand about the between classes scheduling. I re-start on the 12th. Oh well. Thats college for you.

Please include Malik? Let him live too..lol don't kill him in the first ten sentences..lol

Ryou is alright, he seems shy and reserved. not afraid. Thats in character. In the show , remember he ran from a plastic skeleton for ten mins. He is adorable though..lol

I do have to say its so much better and I can’t wait and see what the out come is going to be, and with Marik holding an Item (the Rod) and it being a weapon rolled into one, is never a good thing O.o, and the two Bakura and Marik are just up to no good, and I’m wanting know what myself, and can’t wait for the action…. down to what I hate doing. As much as I love the chap and the story there were a few spelling mistakes… but take no notice of me ^.^ you did a great job, so update soon and Later

Hm, this is interesting! I like it! I'm very excited to see where you take this, and how Yami and Ryou meet. There's just too little of that pairing around! Please update again soon if you can, I'm really enjoying this fic!

Okay, I just have to say that, I liked your original piece, hm…. Yes I have to agree though that Bakura and Marik are much better treatment towards Ryou, but there was so much in the other one that had me waiting to know more, so I hope you don’t leave out to much, but over all it was smoother and just much better, ^.~ good work and update soon, Later