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faith bonksie 2008-06-25 ch 5,	abuseoh this is so good! Please update soon. I cant wait!
KIRA FIRE WOLF 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuselove it
Warriora 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuse"Four days before, they had been driving home from their twenty-second anniversary dinner at the most expensive restaurant in San Fransisco, Charmed, when their little car had been blind-sided by a delivery truck." Wow, very first paragraph. I feel smart. >.< YOU'VE NEVER SEEN ANY MONTY PYTHON? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?? Lol, just joking. But I do believe your soul would thank you if you sat down and watched the Holy Grail. It's just hilarious.
History Buff 1990 2008-04-18 ch 5,	abuseYAY! AN UPDATE! You've just made my Saturday, even though I'm only one hour in, lol. I'd almost forgotten about this story though, not good, especially for such a rocking piece of writing, lol. I can't wait to see how this one continues. You've got something really good going here, please keep it up, if you forget about this again for such an amount of time I will have no choice but to hunt you down and force you at scissor-point to write! ... So, I suppose you should get onto typing in order to avoid such an incident, don't you agree?
Warriora 2008-04-18 ch 5,	abuseTHANK YOU FOR UPDATING! I've been in such a good mood all day, this was just wonderful. :) Great chapter. Not a lot happened, but it's always good to just get to know the characters before the plot starts sprinting and it's too late for anything like this. Although, we did find some important stuff, too- like, WHAT'S WRONG WITH CHRIS?? What was with his reaction to the restruant "Charmed-"? Does he know about the Charmed Ones being the ones trying to get to Wyatt? Is HE magical, too? And why did he get sick? Is it just all the emotional turmoil of their situation causing him to be sick, or is he coming down with something? OR is it something of vital importance to the storyline? I just don't know. -And for the record, Monty Python kicks the Wizard of Oz's ass. :) Anyways, good chapter, and I can't wait for the next!
ksloan9142 2008-04-17 ch 5,	abusereally great chapter i love the alyssa character
missyme89 2008-04-16 ch 5,	abuseawesome:)
Evil Amplified 2008-04-16 ch 5,	abuseOh man, there were so many awesome scenes in that chapter. I love the way you write Wyatt as such a supportive older brother. And the mention of Piper's restaurant was just awesome. Man, how does this kid know so much? You have got me standing on pins and needles waiting for more. Please upadte soon.
Blackangle2011 2008-02-23 ch 4,	abuseupdate soon
Warriora 2008-02-16 ch 4,	abuseThis is pretty freakin' awesome! I love it how you've managed to make Wyatt the main character in one side of the story but Chris the main character in Wyatt's side. Very nice job. I can't wait for the next chapter, and hopefully a conversation between Wyatt and the Halliwells that gets a little farther than 'Get out.' So, PLEASE update soon!
ksloan9142 2008-02-12 ch 4,	abusepretty nice story
History Buff 1990 2008-02-12 ch 4,	abuseWow, I love this story. I can't wait to see how things develop from here. Please update soon.
charmedgrl4ever 2008-02-11 ch 4,	abusekonban wa T'was cute to be sure, but you could do with writing a little more detail. That's the key that you're missing. :) Sorry, too exhausted to write a real review. :P My eyes keep closing, and I still have so much work to do! Ugh... smiles Okay, it's my choice to be doing the work I'm doing, so I really can't be pissed. Just tired. So so tired. Ha det -Shan-
DestinyDenied 2008-02-11 ch 4,	abuseI like this story a lot. I just started reading it, but it has a really good storyline. Hopefully everything winds up with a happy ending for everyone.
loving4tomorrow 2008-02-11 ch 4,	abuseI'm just gald you've updated. This was a good chapter, even if it was short. I can't wait for the angst.

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