Man I already reaad this on asynjor... it was awesome but now I'm too lazy to reveiw here. Sorry about that. I hope it makes it better if I add it to favorites. But I LOVED the plot twist with pluto and the demonic arua. As well as the bloated blubber-ball getting what was coming to her. But the Pluto/Dog thing was creepy, in a good way.
Ahh...good ol' , where many of the best fics get the fewest reviews. I guarantee you would have received more if you would have had a lemon with Ranma and a whole harem/entourage of girls. .
I'm sad to say that it's been a long time since...wait, it's actually been the first time, come to think of it, that I've fully read this fic. I think I was too ticked off at Pokemon, in general, to get past the whole Pokemon World thing. I blame it on the fact that whenever I grew comfortable enough with a friend to let them know that, yes, I enjoy anime, their first words were something like; "oh, I don't really like Pokemon", or, worse yet "My favorite Pokemon is _, what about you". (shudder)
I think my favorite part was when you firs had Demon start to eat other Pokemon. That instantly brought him to the top of my list.
I don't have a ton to say, as far as critiques go. About the worst is that the ending left me with some...doubts, I guess you could say. The Senshi just had one of their own pretty much killed by the Amazons. True, they have a bit of an excuse to be somewhat cold with Ranma, giving the horror they witnessed at the end, but it still rubs me the wrong way that they didn't so much as offer to try and help with a cure for Ami, choosing to just huddle in their little area of the village instead. This is particularly awful given the fact that Katya should really know better, given her knowledge of Ranma, as well as her cynical attitude. (but, I'm not the author...and this route DOES make things more interesting, ne? :P)
Well, thanks for the fic...I'll be posting the review for The World at War shortly.
this is my fourth or fifth read of this fic and it still remains one of the best of any genre, honestly don't know why it doesn't have a few hundred reviews since I've seen pathetic dribble have that many so this obviously deserves more...enough A-kissing, great story and hope you continue writing for a long time to come (such as the unfinished sequal. hint, hint) :)
Excellent, excellent, meilleur que le "Hearts of ice", doit avoir plus. Sorry, revert to french (fairly fractured French at that) when exited. denken schlecht war, (is it "war" or "bath", I cant remember, and i am too tired to look it up) versuchen mein Deutsches. Anyway, onto the review, if you don’t read French, I said that this was excellent, better than "Hearts of ice", Which is among my favorites, its up their with Destinies Child, but I will not know which I like more until much later own, The story is a little short, I prefer them five or six times this length. The chapter lengths were nice, and I really enjoyed the apt descriptions of demons, I cant help but picture the cat demons as looking like Chme of Kzin, don’t know what i am saying, not surprised, before your time in all likelihood. Well, keep up the good work; i am going to search for the next piece. (if any fluent French or German readers are offended by my bad grammar, I apologize, I am still learning) Ciao.
Interesting start, but Ranma's powers seem quite different than anything I recall from the manga, and there is no explanation of the differences. I don't even feel like I'm reading about Ranma, here...
Wonderful but very sad but deserved punishment and such. I will be tuning into the next story. Until next time keep up the good work, wonderful humor and sadness.
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